应用文写作-"英语演讲比赛"新闻报道作文讲评 课件-2024届高考英语作文复习专项

应用文写作 新闻报道 假定你是李华, 你校于上周五晚上7点在学校报告厅成功地举办了英语演讲比赛, 现在请你用英文为校报写一篇报道, 内容包括: 1. 活动简述; 2. 比赛过程; 3. 比赛意义。 一、审题 1. 写信人的身份 及其他情况 2. 收信人的身份 及其他情况 3. 内容要点 写作目的 第一段：写信背景(信息来源, 写信目的等等)： 第二段：实现写作目的最重要的内容： 第三段：表达希望等等： 二、内容构思+谋篇布局 1. 活动简述 演讲比赛时间、地点以及目的等等 2. 比赛过程 主持人/选手/评委等人物, 演讲/才艺表演/评分/互动/颁奖/致辞等环节 3. 比赛意义 英语学习的兴趣/热情 / 英语知识和能力的提高 ... 2-4行 1-3行 Problem One：单词短语用错 比赛 competition / contest / game 评分, 打分数 score grade vt. 划分等级, (给书面作业)打分 mark n. (学生作业) 分数 评价, 划分等级 rate 裁判员, 评判员 judge 奖 prize / award 颁奖, 授予 award 轮流 in turn / one by one 轮流做某事 take turns to do sth. 演讲比赛 speech/speaking contest/competition 才艺演出 talent show lecture hall 报告厅 witness vt. 见证 witness sth. (不接宾语从句) Last Friday evening witnessed an English Speech Contest which was held in our school Lecture hall. sth./ 活动 be aimed/trageted at sth. 旨在, 目的是... sb./组织 aim to do sth. 力求达到 Aiming to get students more interested in English, our school held ... Aimed/Targeted at getting students more interested in English, an English speech contest was held ... 演讲比赛目的 的表达 in order to do sth. 为了 In order to get students more interested in English, ... Problem Two：比赛过程 不等于 比赛要求/规定 Problem Three：时态用错 对比赛过程的报道 一般过去式 比赛意义 现在完成时 / 一般过去式 写稿人的希望和祝福 一般将来时 Highly expected finalists gave their wonderful speeches and performed their talent show, which offered an enjoyable feast for everyone present. The competition turned out to be a complete success, which has sparked great enthusiasm for English learning. I hope more activities like this will be held. 丰富的短语和句型 it 作形式主语和形式宾语 强调句型 it is ... that ... 动名词做主语 从句(定语从句,...) 倒装 固定搭配/词组 近义词/同义词 提升表达的方式 it 作形式主语和形式宾语 强调句型 it is ... that ... It was an enjoyable experience to see the contestants deliver their speeches in turn. It was the brilliant competitors that/who took turns to give their speeches. The contestants delivered their speeches in turn, whose performances won bursts of applause. 动名词