读后续写三二一法则 课件-2024届高三英语一轮复习

2 0 2 4 读后续写- 五步轻松拿高分 1 高分范文三大要求 01 续写内容质量高,完整以及与原文情境融洽 02 所使用词汇和语法结构准确,恰当多样 03 上下文衔接连贯 2 写作过程 读懂大意, 理清脉络 主要是根据记叙文的六要素弄清文章大意,特别要弄清故事的人物,时态(通常是一般过去时),事件(故事的起因和经过),语言特色(以便在续写时语言特色前后一致,保持不变),等等。 人物时态和事件, 语言特色不要变 3 五个步骤 读懂大意,理清脉络 读所给的不完整故事, 弄清大意和主题 增加细节,开始写作 根据“所见/遇所想, 所为所感”等构思具体细节。 细读首句,构思框架 仔细阅读所给两段的首 句,结合正能量结尾, 思考大致框架。 修改润色,整洁誊写 思考再三,把修正润色后 的续写整洁地写入答卷。 分析记叙文五要素 理清故事的主要人物和事件。 4 01. 分析主体语篇 读懂大意, 理清脉络 5 步骤一:读懂大意,理清脉络 读所给的不完整故事,弄清大意和主题,理清故事的主要人物和事件。 It all began with a perfect gift. A couple of months before I started high school, my parents gave me the greatest gift any teenage boy could ask for: a smartphone. I lived on that phone all summer with my face buried in its screen. I held multi-day marathon messages with every friend to keep in contact with them. I ignored my family,my surroundings and on one unfortunate afternoon, a closed door that seemed to appear out of nowhere. What I was doing was secondary to what everyone else was doing. Being connected was more important than being present. So, I felt extremely displeased when I learned about my father's travel arrangements for our family vacation that year." This year, my dad said,"we’ll be doing something special. We’re going camping." 思考1:最后会发生变化吗?会发生什么样的转变? 步骤一:读懂大意,理清脉络 His excitement was met with a disappointed sigh. But I wasn't too annoyed. It wasn't my dream vacation, but it was still a vacation.I remained unbothered throughout the packing,planning and, of course, the instructions that went in one ear and out the other. My mind was on my phone, and the messages were flying back and forth. I was so absorbed in the screen in my hand, in fact, that the first time I can remember truly looking up was when we drove across a bridge on the way to our campsite. I stared out the window in a daze and saw redwoods towering above us,and a roaring river rushing by. The air blowing into the ear from the open windows was hot and smelled of pine. But none of that mattered to me. The reason I had looked up was for something