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话题读写思维训练
话题3 活动介绍(10年6考)
写作指导 校园活动(2023)
河南英语KB
英语
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话题概述
分析河南近10年中招真题可知,2023年书面表达考查了此话题,要求考生介绍学校30分钟大课间的活动内容及建议。分析全国真题可知,此话题通常有以下命题角度:1. 社团、俱乐部活动;2.校内文体活动;3. 外出参观、游览或研学活动;4. 毕业活动等。
※该话题写作佳句及范文积累见《晨读词句篇》P64。
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典例剖析
假如你是李华,上个月你校举行了“祖国在我心中”的主题活动, 请以“Motherland in My Heart”为题,并根据写作要求,用英语写一篇短文向你校英语报投稿,介绍此次活动内容。
写作要求:1)介绍举行此次活动的目的是什么; 2)活动具体包括哪些内容;
3)你对此次活动有什么感想及愿望; 4)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
5)词数100左右。
Motherland in My Heart
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【审题指导】
1.定主题: ______________
2.定文体: ________
3.定人称: __________
4.定时态:介绍活动目的和内容用 ____________,感想及愿望用
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活动内容介绍
说明文
第一人称
一般过去时
一般现在时&一般将来时
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【写作框架】
Motherland in My Heart
开
头 要点1:活动目的
目的:express our love for our motherland, learn about our country’s
history, value today’s good life…
句型:①In order to… last month. ②To… our school held an
event… last month. ③The purpose is… ④The event aims at…
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Motherland in My Heart
中
间 要点2:活动内容
内容:sing red songs, learn knowledge about our country, telling
stories about the Red Army, give a lecture…
句型:①There are many activities in this event, such as… ②We
have many activities, including… ③…are the main activities of this
event.
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续表
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Motherland in My Heart
结
尾 要点3:感想及愿望
感想及愿望: meaningful, educational, be proud of, wish, expect,
become stronger and greater...
句型:①I think... ②In my opinion... ③I believe that... ④I
wish/hope/expect that... ⑤It’s my great wish that... ⑥I’m looking
forward to...
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续表
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【成果输出】
Motherland in My Heart
Last month, our school held an event with the theme of “Motherland in My Heart” to express our love for our motherland.
During the event, we had many activities, including singing red songs and telling stories about the Red Army. I took part in the singing competition. Besides, I attended the sp