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先来看一篇关于建议外国笔友如何学好汉语的作文
Here are some suggestions for you. Firstly, you can attend a training course. You can learn some widely used words and expressions. Then, you should read some Chinese books, magazines and watch some TV programs, so that you may know more about our culture. At the some time you can learn some native pop songs, so that you can improve your pronunciation and listening skills. It is good for you to make some local friends, because it needs some practice to learn a foreign language well.
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Here are some (several) suggestions for you. To begin with, there is no doubt that you'd better attend a training course, where you can learn some widely used words and expressions. Moreover, needless to say, you should (are supposed to) read some Chinese books and magazines as well as watch some TV programs, so that you may know more about our culture. What's more, if I were you, I would learn some native pop songs, so that the pronunciation and listening skills would be improved. Last but certainly not least, no one can deny it is good (beneficial) for you to make some local friends, considering that it does need some practice to learn a foreign language well.
When they heard the news, they all jumped for joy.
You can fully understand it only when you do it by yourself.
He was very tired. He couldn’t walk any farther.
Remember: “ Practice makes perfect!”
I like reading English novels.
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Here are several suggestions for you.
技巧一:替换主语,用物做主语
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I like English.
English is my favourite subject.
English attracts/interests me a lot.
I thought of an idea.
An idea suddenly came into my mind.
An idea occurred to me.
The cell phone has accompanied me for a year.
I have used the cell phone for a year.
The cell phone has been used for a year.
You should chat more with your classmates.
Chatting more with your classmates is good/benefical for you.
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It is good/benefical for you to chat more with y