应用文写作 分享比赛心得 讲义-2024届高三英语一轮复习

题目： 假定你是李华，上周参加了全市中学生英语口语大赛。请你写一封邮件给美国笔友Peter,与他分享参赛心得，内容包括:1.参赛过程; 2.参赛收获。 分析： 这次写作的问题：1.写成了说明文，类似新闻报道，（请看后面的新闻报道，注意区别），不符合书信风格，很多同学千篇一律witness...，却忽略这是让你给对方写信；2.比赛过程的描写干巴巴的，句式单一，例如：First, I did...; Then, I did...之类。 写参赛过程，两种思路：（1）时间顺序记录每一步做了什么；（2）参赛中的心情描写，类似读后续写的记叙。 我们参考一些模考卷的考法分两种写法： 一、时间顺序——考题链接：浙江Z20名校联盟第二次联考（做过的题目，请回忆） 假定你是李华，上周末你参加了学校组织的市科技馆研学活动，请你在校英文论坛发表一篇帖子，分享此次经历，内容包括1. 活动过程；2. 个人感悟；3. 期待评论。 答案： An Unforgettable Tech Exploration Tour Last weekend I participated in a fabulous tech exploration tour in the city science museum organized by our school. It kicked off with an exhibition of the history of Chinese science, unfolding the awe-striking wisdom behind. What followed was a hands-on experience, which uncovered the secrets of science. With a lecture on the prospect of science, the tour was brought to an end. Not only did the tour instill me with a sense of pride in our scientific advances, but it also planted in my heart a seed of scientific exploration. Anybody who shares the same feeling? Anticipating your comments! 提炼： Last weekend I participated in ... organized by .... It kicked off with ..., 非谓语结果. What followed was ..., which .... With ..., ... was brought to an end. Not only did ... instill me with a sense of ..., but it also planted in my heart a seed of .... 【仿写填空】 Dear Peter, I cannot wait to share my experience in the high school English speech contest of the city last week.     It kicked off with___________________________, _____________________________________________. What followed was_____________________________________________, which__________________________ ______________________________. With _____________________________________________, ____________ _______________________ was brought to an end. Not only did ________________________________________ _______________________________________, but it also______________________________________________ ___________________________________________. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Pete