内容正文:
高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解
一、投稿:中学生“翘饭”现象
(2024届12月浙江省三校(缙云中学、长兴中学、余杭高级中学)联考)
学校英文报正在开展以“How Often Meals Are Skipped”为题的调查,结果显示绝大多数学生都存在“翘饭”现象,请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.调查结果和评论;2.你的建议。
注意:1.词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
How Often Meals Are Skipped
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:二段论。第一段介绍调查结果(要点1);第二段发表评论(要点1)并提出建议(要点2)。
【参考范文】
How Often Meals Are Skipped
Our school English newspaper carried out an survey on How Often Meals Are Skipped. It comes as a shock that half of the students skip meals once a day, and 8 percent several times a week. By contrast, the number of those who never or seldom skip meals accounts for 37% and 5% respectively.
Reasons are various. Some believe that there is not enough time for them to eat and some argue that they take no interest in the food in the cafeteria, which will do great harm to our health. Therefore, it’s high time to attach great importance to it, and here comes my advice. What comes first is to strengthen the awareness of regular meals through education and activities.It is also preferable for the school to listen to the students’ demands to enrich the variety of dishes and improve the taste of food. (145 words)
【中文翻译】
大家下午好!我们的外教Lucy老师返回美国。今天,我们在这里为她举行欢送会。
“翘饭”何其多
近日,校英文报开展的“翘饭现象”调查报告出炉,结果令人震惊。有一半的学生每天翘饭一次,还有8%的学生每周翘饭几次。相比之下,从不翘饭和很少翘饭的分别占比为37%和5%。
学生翘饭的理由很多,有说来不及吃的,也有说不喜欢食堂的菜。长期翘饭势必会影响我们的身体健康。因此,我们要高度重视这种“翘饭”现象了,对此我有几点建议。首先,应该加强“翘饭”危害性的宣教活动,让全校同学都意识到这么做的不利后果。其次,学校也应听取学生的诉求,丰富菜品种类,改进食物的口味。
【参考范文解析】
1.应用文写作前三步骤:
(1)审题判定文体为投稿;
(2)因文体是投稿,故作者身份在正文中不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为介绍调查结果并发表评论和提出建议,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点:
(1)It comes as a shock that主语从句,it为形式主语;
(2)by contrast相比之下;
(3)account for占...比例;
(4)take no interest in对...不感兴趣;
(5)do great harm to对...造成伤害;
(6)attach great importance to对...高度重视;
(7)here comes my advice运用完全倒装结构;
(8)What comes first is to首先要做某事;
(9)It is also preferable to do sth其次要做某事。
二、介绍信:成人仪式
、
(深圳实验、湛江一中、珠海一中2024届高三三校联考)
假设你是李华,上周六参加了学校为高三学生举行的成人仪式。请根据以下要点,向你的外国朋友David介绍成人仪式的有关情况:1.活动过程;2.你的感受。
注意:1.词数100词左右;开头和结尾以为你写好。
参考词汇:成人仪式the