2024届高考英语一轮复习应用文解析与仿写之投稿讲义

投稿 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1）海洋的重要性； 2）保护海洋的倡议。 注意： 1）词数100左右； 2）短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation. Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can't be thrown into ocean. What's more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is. All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves. 【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文 【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生 写一篇短文投稿 。写作背景： 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主，举办英语征文比赛 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）海洋的重要性；2）保护海洋的倡议。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。 【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. 运用了时间状语从句；Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. 运用了倒装句，并列句；Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. 运用了it作形式主语；First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.运用了主语从句； For example, garbage can't be thrown into ocean. 运用了被动语态；The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.运用了“the+比较级，the+比较级”固定句式；All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean.运用了虚拟语气。 考题写作 （2022·全国乙卷）学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1）学习活动状况描述： 2）简单评论； 3）你的建议。 注意： 1）词数100左右； 2）短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 Learning English Beyond the Classroom Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an incr