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读后续写范例 独唱
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When I was in middle school, my family moved to Seattle, where my parents started their new business--a small grocery store downstairs my house. As a girl of shy and reserved nature, I had to take a fresh start to fit into the sophisticated city life. (交代故事背景,一家人来到西雅图,我是个害羞腼腆的女生。)
One sunny day, my school announced an exciting event, a talent show for the local food bank. Students were encouraged to showcase their unique talents in front of the public in the city hall on National Day. A buzz of excitement filled the school as everyone began preparing for the big day. Deep down, I felt a spark of curiosity and a desire to participate. However, my self-doubt held me back, “I don’t have any special skills to share.”(学校宣布一项激动人心的消息,同学们被鼓励参加才艺表演,我在内心深处想参加,但我有些自我怀疑,认为自己没有特别的才艺。标红句子体现学生们对即将到来的才艺表演很期待,及我内心想参加的心理活动。)
Days turned into weeks, and the talent show drew closer. I couldn’t shake the upsetting feeling until one day Emma, one of the most popular girls in my class, came to me while I was helping in the grocery store after class. “How about singing together in the talent show?” She grinned, “I heard you singing a tune, along the way back home. I can’t help following you here.” Gosh, I couldn’t believe my ears. Emma, with personality and popularity, acknowledged my little talent. Since Emma had the world’s prettiest voice, I felt like being favoured by fortune. (转折点,Emma听到我的歌声,肯定我的歌声,并想和我一起表演唱歌,我感到很震惊,因为Emma唱歌很好,我感觉我受到了命运的眷顾。标红句子是文章的转折点,因为Emma的肯定,我开始有信心,想尝试参加比赛。)
“You two? The talent show for the food bank?” My mum bent towards us and her face lit up. “A big occasion.” Then a light bulb seemed to go in her head. “Why not practise right now upstairs? I bet you’ll be a perfect match.” Winking at us, she seemed to know we were thinking alike.(我把我们的想法告诉了妈妈,妈妈对我的想法很支持,并提供场所让我们排练。为下文我们排练的很好做铺垫。)
Emma and I embarked on rehearsing almost every single day after school. We brainstormed, exchanged ideas and rehearsed the scene. As the days rolled by, I was feeli