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2024浙江1月 高考真题读后续写 By Sophia 路痴的自我救赎 1 Step 1 :真题原文解析 原文阅读 Eva spent the first week of high school trying to keep her head above water. One of the major headaches for her was finding her way in the huge school building. It was a six-story building. On each floor, hallways stretched in four directions, leading to classrooms, laboratories, and teachers’ offices. Somewhere in the building, there was also a library, a cafeteria, and a gym. Having a poor sense of direction, Eva found it impossible to get around in such a huge building. All the different hallways and rooms were too much to think about, let alone commit to memory. She decided that she would memorize where her classes were and then pretend that the rest of the place didn’t exist. who when& where what (conflict) 矛盾的升级 类型：problems(问题）-- causes（原因） --solutions_（解决方法） 占位符标题 04 Para. 1 &Para.2 : 背景设定：Eva在高中的第一周努力适应。她面临的一个主要难题是在一所庞大的学校建筑中找到自己的路。这座建筑有六层，每层都有四个方向的走廊。 主要矛盾：Eva个人对于挑战的恐惧和如何克服这一挑战—学校里认路的挑战） 主题：面对恐惧、适应新环境、自我成长和克服困难 4 原文阅读 In her fast P.E. class, Eva was shocked when Coach Pitt announced that everyone had to run one mile around the track outside. She searched the faces of her classmates for signs of panic. There was nothing she feared more than having to run a whole mile. To Eva, “a mile” was used to describe long distances. It was ten miles from her home to her grandfather’s, and that always seemed like a long way, even in a car! When Coach Pitt blew his whistle (哨子), Eva figured she would be left in the dust. However, while some of her classmates edged ahead, others actually fell behind. “It’s just the beginning,” she thought. “I’ll come in last for sure.” Para.3 & Para. 4 主要矛盾：Eva个人对于挑战的恐惧和如何克服这些挑战:体育课上的挑战. 矛盾继续升级：挑战2 自我否定 self-doubt 原文阅读 Soon Eva began to breathe hard, with her heart pounding and legs shaking. Feeling desperate, Eva started using a mind