读后续写专题第8章 如何进行动作描写 讲义-2024届高三英语作文写作复习

读后续写:动作描写 1.动作描写3种句式 ①动作+五官:独立主格句式 ②动作+分解:非谓语句式 ③动作+场景转换:时间状语从句 2、动词语料库 ①万能动词短语(如何扩写sb do sth) ②常用动词(高分替换词) ③各部位动作(动作描写, 超全汇总,看这里够了) 动作描写: 3种写法 1.动作+五官:独立主格句式 ①独立主格:身体部位+非谓语动词,sbdosth.(with+情绪名词/声线) Tears welling up in his eyes, he thanked the police in a trembling voice. 2、动作+分解:非谓语句式 ①V-ing,主句 ②主句，V-ing ③ Having donesth,主句 ④V-ed (情绪形容词),主句, V-ing ⑤ To dosth,主句(前加目的) 3、动作+场景转换:时间状语从句 主宾.分离(加动作/加地点) : Sb dosth->改成: When sth.... sb do sth 解析 1、动作+五官之独立主格句式 独立主格:身体部位+非谓语v, sb do sth. (with+情绪名词/声线) ◆眼泪 Tears welling up in his eyes, he thanked the police with/in a trembling voice. 泪水在他的眼睛里涌出，他用颤抖的声音向警察表示感谢。 My spirits sank, tears streaming down my cheeks. 我的情绪低落，泪水顺着我的脸颊流下来。 Eyes filled with regretful tears, sb do sth. (眼里充满遗憾的泪水,某人做某事) Eyes glittering with relief/joy, sb do sth. (眼里 闪着欣慰和喜悦，某人做某事) Eyes widening in joy/surprise/fear(情绪名词), sb dosth (眼睛..地睁大) ◆脸/心/肢体 Face blushing scarlet, he apologized for what he had done. 脸红着，他为自己的所作所为道歉。 Heart burning/filled with frustration, she lowered her head. 心在燃烧/充满挫败感,她低下了头。 Heart pounding/beating with happiness, she leapt into the air. 心因快乐而跳动着,她跳了起来。 Arms/legs/muscles aching and knees shaking/ trembling, I sat down. 胳膊/腿/肌肉疼痛,膝盖颤抖/颤抖,我坐了下来。 2、动作+分解:非谓语句式 ◆动作几乎同时发生:①V-ing,主句 ②主句, V-ing Considering the threat of the bear, we stayed far away from it. 考虑到熊的威胁，我们远离它。 Feeling ecstatic, she dashed out of the room like a wind. 她欣喜若狂，像风一样冲出了房间。 ◆动作前后发生:③Having done sth,主句 Having known what had happened, she set about dealing with the issue. 在知道发生了什么之后，她开始着手处理这个问题。 ◆动作前加情绪:④V-ed (情绪形容词),主句, V-ing. Relieved and overjoyed, we yelled at the helicopter, trying to catch its attention. 我们松了一口气，欣喜若狂,对直升机大喊大叫，试图引起它的注意。 ◆动作前加目的:⑤Todosth,主句 To distract the bear, we threw a piece of bread far away. 为了分散熊的注意力，我们把一块面 包扔得很远。 ◆动作分解:⑥V1, V2, and V3 ( 可改成: V-ing, sb do sth, V-ing ) We rose from the seat, walked out of the hall, and left the cinema. 我们从座位上站起来，走出大厅，离开了电影院。 Seeing the helicopter, we cried out“Help!", waving our hands like mad. 看到直升机