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读后续写 连接词八大类.
时空转换●衔接流畅
读后续写连接词合集
1.时间连接词: (时空转换/场景 转换)
同时: ..While/When/ As/the moment sb1 do sth, sb2 do sth.
接续: Shortly/Swiftly/Soon afterwards,... / Subsequently / not long before
当下: At that very/critical moment, sb... / For one agonizing moment...
最后: Eventually / At length / Ultimately
2、逻辑连接词: (衔接流畅)
强调: Actually/Indeed/Truly... /Obviouly.../ Particularly...
转折: Instead/Nevertheless/Unfortunately/ Alternatively,..
结果: Consequently/Accordingly/turn out/prove/end up doing
推测: It is very likely tha.../It is highly possible that... perhaps/probably
解析
连接词1:时间连接词(同时/接续/当 下/最后/过去)
同时: (同时空人/物,分工/互动;丰富画面/场景)
①While/When/As/the moment sb/sth... sb2 dosth. (当..时/那刻,某人做某事)
②Meanwhile,.. / In the meantime,... (同 ...)
◆连接思路1:主语宾语.画面分离(动作/地点)
句式:原sbdo sth->改When sth... sb do sth
[例子1] :
原句:“ 登直升机”: We got onto the helicopter quickly.
改写:“当直升机降落时,我们登直升机,既兴奋又松了一口气”
-> Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved.
【例子2】 :
原句:“登直升机->我发现..”: We got onto the helicopter quickly. I found that... .改写:“登直升机->当我们在空中安全乘坐直升机时,我发现熊...”
-> We got onto the helicopter quickly. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind.
场景转换:主语/宾语分镜头
我们登直升机’
->当直升机..时,我们登直升机.
(登直升机)“我发现熊冲向食物”
->当我们在空中安全乘坐直升机时,我发现熊冲向食物
◆连接思路2:加五感,
句式:原sb do sth->改When sb saw/thought.... sb do sth
[例子1] :
原句:“我们登直升机”: We got onto the helicopter quickly.
改写:“当我们看到直升机降落时,我们马上冲过去登机”
-> As we saw the helicopter landing, we dashed to it and got onboard fast.
[例子2] :
原句:“登直升机->我发现熊..”. : We got onto the helicopter quickly. I found that...改写:“登直升机->当我俯瞰营地时,我发现..
-> We got onto the helicopter quickly. When ( I was ) looking down at the camp site, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind.
◆可用句式,创造性模仿: (片段练习,中间可加其他句子)
* While/When/ As sb was thinking, sb caught sight of sth... (在思考时, 突然看到)
* When sb saw sth, sb do st