专题11读后续写之闪亮开头 -【高分•技能】2024年高考英语写作常考题型全面突破

专题11读后续写之闪亮开头 一篇好的文章需要一个吸引眼球的开头。同样，一个好的段落，也要有一个吸引人的开头。它就像是一块敲门砖，敲开阅卷老师的高分之门。As the saying goes," well begun,half done !"良好的开始就是成功的一半！可见，写出一个引人入胜的开头是多么的重要。那么在时间紧迫的考场上如何才能写出靓丽的开头呢？以下开头小技巧都是满满干货，经典例句，可以助您旗开得胜。 1.无灵主语妙用 无灵主语，即无生命的事物做主语，该类句子自带拟人的修辞色彩，把没有生命的东西，赋予生命，从而增加了句子的多样性，使语言更加灵动多变。 ①Anxiety tore him into pieces.  他焦虑万分，肝肠寸断。 ② Despair seized him at the thought of his failure in the exam.  一想到考试的失败，他就万念俱灰。 ③The story reminds me of a saying that “Never judge a person by his appearance”. 这个故事使我想起来一句谚语“不能以貌取人”。 ④His face burned with shame. 他羞愧的脸都红了。 ⑤ Night has fallen over the country.  夜幕已经笼罩着乡间。 ⑥The thought of returning to her hometown soon  filled her heart with great happiness.  想到不久就要回到故乡，她心中感到十分快乐。 ⑦A surge of excitement bubbling up inside me,I looked up into my dad’s dark eyes. 一阵兴奋涌上心头，我看向父亲深邃的眼睛。 ⑧Silence fell upon us for a moment. 我们之间沉默了片刻。 2.巧用非谓语动词 ① Feeling refreshed , she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out . 她感到神清气爽，继续沿着小溪散步，寻找出去的路。 这里用 feeling refreshed 的形式，很好体现了后一个动作" walk "的伴随状态。 ② “No,it is not your lamb.It’s ours!”said Charlie,placing himself in front of it. “不，这不是你的羊，这是我们的！”查理说着站到了羊的前面。 ③ Feeling desperate and scared, she hid herself in a tree. 感觉既绝望又害怕，她藏到了一棵树上。 ④To keep herself safe from the darkness,she tried to hide herself in a tall tree. 为了自己在夜里的安全，她努力爬上一棵树藏了起来。 ⑤I was speechless at this, feeling ashamed of my selfishness and guilty at my misunderstanding. 对于这件事我说不出话来，对自己的自私感到羞愧也对我的误解感到内疚。 ⑥ Failing to say a single word, he was rooted to the spot. 一句话也说不出来，他愣在那里一动不动。 ⑦Not knowing what to do , I just stood there and frozen with terror. 不知所措，我站在那里被吓呆了。 3.巧用副词开头kaitou ① Carefully, he picked up all the sequins(亮片)with his eyes full of tears. 眼含泪水，他仔细地将亮片捡起。 ②Finally/Eventually ,she went herself with a heavy heart,dragging her leaden legs,and bargained with the butcher. 最终，她怀着沉重的心情，拖着灌了铅般的双腿，自己去了那里，并且跟屠夫讨价还价起来。 ③ Immediately , absolute darkness ruled the forest. 很快，黑暗笼罩了整个森林。 此处运用副词immediately开头，同时，该句另一亮点是运用无灵主语句，ab