Unit 10写作 2023-2024学年人教版英语八年级下册

unit 10单元写作 写作主题：如何写生活环境的相关文章 1 话题分析 本单元的话题是" Living environment(生活环境)"，要求学生学会描述自己周边环境的变化，并适当表达自己的感受。在写这类文章时，要注意正确运用时态，内容合理，行文流畅、完整。 2经典名题 根据表格所给内容要点,以"The changes in my hometown"为题写一篇英语短文。要点如下： 过去 1.空气清新，环境很好； 2.房屋又小又旧，人们走路或是骑车去上班； 3.是一个宁静的地方。 现在 1.住房宽敞明亮，很多人都有了自己的汽车； 2.这些变化给年轻人带来了现代化的生活，他们都感到很高兴； 3.树比以前少了，环境不如以前好了。 将来 请你展望家乡的未来(1—2句)。 要求：1.字迹工整，要点全面；2. 90 词左右。 The changes in my hometown 3.写作思维导图 审题 体裁 说明文 话题 家乡的变化 时态 一般过去时，一般现在时，现在完成时 人称 以第三人称为主 段落 布局 the air was fresh, the environment 描述家乡 was good, the houses were small and 的过去 old, people went to work on foot or by bike, a quiet place the houses are big and bright, many 描述家乡 people have their own cars, bring 的现在 young people a modern life, fewer trees, the environment is not as good as before 展望家乡 →I hope my hometown will be... 的未来 参考词汇 in the past 过去；go to work 去上班；on foot 步行；by bike 骑自行车； feel happy 感到高兴not as good as 不如……好 参考句子 1. My hometown has changed a lot in recent years. 最近几年，我的家乡发生了很大变化。 2. It used to be a/an... place. 它过去是个……地方。 3. Now things have changed a lot. 现在事情发生了很大变化。 4. I hope my hometown... 我希望我的家乡…… 4.高分例文 The changes in my hometown My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.①In the past, the air here was very fresh and the environment was good. The houses were small and old.People went to work on foot or by bike. It used to be a very quiet place. ②Now things are quite different. The houses are big and bright. Many people have their own cars. The changes have brought young people a modern life. They all feel happy. ③But there are fewer trees, and the environment is not as good as before. ④I hope my hometown will be more and more beautiful so that we can live a happier life. 例文分析： 文章开门见山，引出话题，接着分段描述家乡的今昔变化，并对未来进行了展望，思路清晰，条理分明，行文合理、紧凑。 ①句