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《2024年1月浙江首考英语卷深度解析及变式训练》
专题09 应用文写作(思维导图+话题语料+10篇范文+模拟) 原卷版
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原题呈现
) 关键词:人与自我, 推荐信, 体育健康, 推荐礼物, 书本, 电影, 社团, 旅行线路
请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动,内容包括:
1. 介绍这项运动;
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
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【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
厌倦:be tired of→be fed up with
首先:first→above all
减轻:combat→relieve
提高:improve→enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths.
拓展句:This is a simple routine that involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
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一、身体健康
enhance physical fitness - 提高体能
strengthen muscles and joints - 增强肌肉和关节的力量
boost cardiovascular health - 促进心血管健康
increase energy levels - 提升精力充沛度
improve posture and balance - 提升体态和平衡感
promote overall well-being 提升整体的幸福感
二、缓解压力
reduce mental strain - 减轻心理压力
ease anxiety and tension - 缓解焦虑和紧张
promote relaxation - 促进放松
provide a mental break - 提供心理上的休憩时间
foster a sense of calm - 培育内心的宁静感受
decompress from academic pressure - 减轻学业压力
三、健康的生活习惯
establish a routine of wellness - 建立健康的日常规律
embed physical activity into daily life - 将体育活动融入日常生活
prioritize health and fitness - 优先考虑健康和健身
adopt a proactive approach to health - 采取积极的健康方式
encourage consistent exercise - 鼓励持续锻炼
cultivate a mindset of self-care - 培育一种自我照顾的心态
四、非常适合课间互动
quick and effective exercises - 快速有效的练习
fit into a busy schedule - 适应繁忙的日程
short bursts of activity - 短时段的高强度活动
time-efficient workout