内容正文:
高中写作-倡议书系列-保护动物话题
写作路径
首段
描述现象问题,提出倡议目的
中段
说明意义,倡议内容(措施)
末段
表决心,发出呼吁,口号
谋篇布局:三段式
Para.1:倡议对象的称呼,简要说明背景(现象和问题),并提出倡议目的;
Para.2:说明倡议活动的意义;重点是写倡议的具体内容和建议事项、措施;
Para.3:表示倡议者的决心和希望,再次发出呼吁、口号,倡议者和日期。
【词汇积累】
1. 灭绝 go extinct/in danger of extinction/on the verge/blink of extinction/face a high risk of extinction
2. 给它们造成痛苦 cause suffering to them
3. 宠物是主人的伙伴 pets are the companions of their masters
4. 给主人心理安慰 afford their masters consolation and comfort.
5. 砍伐森林 log forests
6. 破坏生态系统 damage the ecosystem
7. 建立更多的自然保护区 create more nature reserves.
8. 能自由的走动、飞翔或畅游 can roam, fly or swim freely
9. 人类的干扰 human-caused disturbances
10. 改善生物多样性 improve biodiversity
11. 减少 decrease=on the decrease=drop
12. 无情的 without mercy
【衔接词】
1.总而言之,简言之in a nutshell=in brief=in a word=in short
2.类似的 similarly=likewise
3.具体来说 to be more precise/exact/specific
4.例如 for instance=take sth. for example=a case in point is
5.更重要的是 more importantly,
6.更糟糕的是 even worse,=what’s worse,
7.这样的话 in this case
8.因此 therefore/consequently/as a consequence/As a result
9.相比之下 by contrast
10. 然而(对比) while, whereas, whilst
11. 然而(转折)but/however/nevertheless/nonetheless
【措施】
1. 通过立法来保护动物 introduce laws to protect the animals.
2. 被绳之以法 be brought to justice.
3. 应对...严惩 strict punishment should be impose on
4. 有效震慑犯罪者 effectively deter criminals
5. 严厉的惩罚 harsh punishment
6. 让某人不敢去做 deter sb. from doing sth.
【呼吁】
1. Let’s ... without hesitation!
2. Let’s join our hands and take action immediately!
3. Let’s do our part to actively engage in ...!
4. In a gesture to ..., we call on everyone to... 以一种姿态去..
5. Please join us in the effort to do sth.
6. Hopefully, you can join in... and offer help to...
7. Let's work together to...
8. Let's take (an immediate) action to ...
9. Actions speak louder than words. Your actions do count!
10. We students should respond actively to the call from authority and experts.
11. appeal to sb to do sth
12. I strongly call on us to act immediately. Only in this way can we...
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