内容正文:
2024年中考英语写作常考文体讲练提分秘籍
专题17 书信邮件类之建议信
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考情分析
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建议信是向收信人针对某事提出自己的建议或忠告,以便让对方接受自己的想法,主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人,针对遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点,也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。
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写作方法指导
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建议信要给出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由,而且提出的理由要合情合理,语气一定要得当,既要委婉礼貌,又要有说服力。
一般来说,建议信可分为三个部分:
(1)开头;开门见山,简要陈述事由,简单介绍自己并陈述自己的观点,注意语气。
(2)主体;说明建议的内容,对所提出的建议进行分析、说明原因。这一部分注意要简 明扼要,目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
(3)结尾;对自己提出的建议简单地做一小结并表达愿望。
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写作模板
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Dear_____,
I am ______,from____________ .(自我介绍) I’m sorry to hear that__________.(简略翻译文字资料)I’d like to take this opportunity to express my suggestion concerning it .(写信目的)
I would recommend you to ___________. (提出建议)In my opinion, it would be beneficial if you could___________________.(改进措施)
I hope that you take my suggestion into serious consideration. I am dying for reply. (期待回复)
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Dear Mary ,
I’m sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. You have studied so hard that your health is falling. I’d like to take this opportunity to express my suggestion concerning it .I feel it would be beneficial to your health if you could take more exercise in future. Never think that time spent on exercise is wasted. Not only can exercise improve your physical health but it will refresh your mind. After on one or two hours of exercise you can study better. Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling tired. If I were you , I would take at least one hour’s exercise every day after recovery.
I hope you would take my suggestion into serious consideration. I would be happy to see you have a stronger body.
Yours sincerely,
John
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常用表达
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一.篇首句
1.I’m very glad to receive your letter. Now I’m writing to give you some advice on how to…
我很高兴收到你的来信。现在我写信给你一些如何…的建议。
2.I’m sorry to know that…. I’d like to share with you some ways of ...
很抱歉的知道…我想给你分享一下…的方法。
3. I have learnt that…. Here are some suggestions that help you.
我知道…这里是我给你的能帮到你的建议。 运用了定语从句
4.How's it going? You asked me about … i