期末Module 11-Module 12作文精讲2023-2024学年外研版九年级英语上册

M11 写作主题Photos 话题概述： 本模块以“照片”为话题，通过介绍摄影比赛的作品，让学生学会如何对某一张照片进行描述。通过该模块的学习，学生能够就某一张照片进行描述。通过该模块的学习，学生能够就某一张照片用who,which或that引导的定语从句进行描述，包括照片拍摄的时间、主题以及喜欢这张照片的原因等。 题目1: 假如你是王成，你们学校英语校刊Voice招聘摄影师的启事引起了你的兴趣，请根据下列信息，用英文给招聘人Marcia写一封申请信。词数80个左右。 姓名：王成；性别：男；年龄：15岁；年级：初三； 兴趣：摄影、写作、户外运动； 性格：活泼，开朗，精力充沛；成就：曾获上海市摄影比赛青少年组二等奖。 应聘目的：参加社会实践活动，丰富业余生活。 基础版本：（用词会比较简单，但是连接不错） Dear Marcia, I am Wang Cheng, a fifteen-year-old boy from/in Junior 3. I am writing to apply for(申请） the position of photographer(摄影师的职位）for Voice. As for my hobbies(就我的爱好而言），I am interested in photography, writing and doing outdoor sports(户外运动）。 So, I have plenty of energy to take good photos. In terms of my personality(就我的性格而言），I am active, outgoing and energetic, which makes me communicate and get along well with others(这让我和他人沟通和交流良好）。 Besides, I have won the second prize in the youth group of Shanghai Photography Competition. I really want to join you, because I think Voice can offer me a golden chance/opportunity to take part in social activities and enrich my life. I'd appreciate it if you could give me this position and I am confident I am the very person(就是那个人）that you are looking for. Looking forward to your replay. Yours, Wang Cheng 作文2: 假设你在学校举办的摄影比赛中获得了最佳摄影奖，并将在颁奖典礼上发言。请根据提示写 一篇发言稿。 提示： （1)你对这次获奖感到非常幸运； （2)你想感谢你的老师们，他们鼓励你参赛并教给你许多拍照技巧； （3)你想感谢你的父亲，他在你13岁时送给你一部照相机。 要求： （1)词数：不少于100. （2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Ladies and gentlemen, Good afternoon. It is my great honor/pleasure/privilege(荣幸） to have won the photography competition in our school. Among all those who helped me(在所有帮助我的人当中）I'd like to appreciate my teachers first. They found my gift in photography, and encouraged me to enter the competition. During the process, they taught me many practical skills/techniques(技巧） in photography. It is their patience and cultivation/teaching(培养） that contribute(d) to(贡献；导致）my success. Moreover, I am also grateful to(感恩） my father, who gave me the first camera when I was13. My father's love and this c