内容正文:
读后续写 考前突击
一、写作三要素:包括应用文和续写
结构:恰当的衔接过渡词让文章结构逻辑严密顺畅自然
内容:涵盖所有内容要点,结尾点睛升华让文章丰满突出
语言:运用灵活多样高级表达和句式让文章灵动优美
用语优先级
短语﹥单词
复合句﹥简答句 并列句
两大核心短语﹥三大从句
高级句式地道表达﹥一般句式普通表达
前提是能够写正确
二、一个核心:动词是英语的灵魂 英语是动词的语言 每句话都要围绕动词展开
三、结构上:动作发生的时间 即这个动作什么时候发生的
时间衔接词表
现在 立刻 马上
Immediately
In a flash
At the moment
Without delay/hesitation
然后
...,(and) then.../afterwards
After that/later on
Before long,...很快
Finally,.../eventually
Before long,an ambulance arrived!
It wasn’t long before an ambulance arrived!
未来
Early in the morning
The next morning/day/week...
一...就
The moment/the second+句子
On/upon doing sth,...
Hardly...,when.../No sooner... than...
(hardly had A done sth when B did sth)
The moment they arrived at the farm,
On/Upon arriving at the farm,what came into sight were varieties of fresh vegetables and fruit tress
Hardly had she sat when she heard someone knocking at the door.
No sooner had I sat down than there was a loud knock on the door.
突然
A was doing sth xx,when B did xx...
I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around when something unpleasant caught my eye.
I was about to leave when something unpleasant caught my eye.
4、 内容上:如何收尾 点睛升华
主题
结局:真善美 感悟道理
人与社会
人间有真情 人间有大爱
人与自我
个人成长与思想转变
人与自然
遇险逃生 与自然和谐共处
收尾思路一:
幡然醒悟,灵活句式表达感悟
经历作主语
This special experience in someone else's room made me realize forgiveness is a kind of virtue.
主从作主语
What happened that day made me realize that forgiveness is a kind of virtue.
强调句
It was the special experience that made me realize forgiveness is a kind of virtue.
倒装句
Not until then did I realize forgiveness is a kind of virtue.
Only then did I realize forgiveness is a kind of virtue.
强调句+状从(高规格)
Now 'm proud of what I look like and much happier because I have realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are. [人与自找]
感悟升级句式
It suddenly dawned on me that...
Only then did it dawn on me that...
收尾思路二:
幡然醒悟,知行合一,身体力行
From then on, I would try my best to help people like .... Only in this way could more and more people h