读后续写讲义-2024届高考英语作文复习专项

读后续写 一、四大要点： S故事线 story line T突破点 target O亮点 outstanding points P基本点 pin down the theme 2、 故事线：通读文章 抓住故事线 5W：what who where when why Theme： 例题 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. Ву the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. "I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away. With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. "Tom! "she cried. "Help!" No reply, If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. 夫妻野外徒步后争吵，妻子独自出行迷路森林，等待救援。 ㈠故事线： ①5W Who：Jane Tom What：Jane was lost Where：in a forest When:one weekend in july Why:a quarrel with Tom her husband ②THEME主题 1.Summary：基本概况 Jane was lost in the forest for three days and survived in the end. 2.Theme：主题升华 Jane learned how to control emotions and deal with conflicts. 第一段段首： But no more helicopters came and it was dark.___________ 第二段段首： It was daybreak when Jane woke up.___________ ㈡突破点 根据已给段首 编造内容 ㈢亮点 刻画细节 ★环境、语言、心理、动作描写 ★丰富句式:非谓语，从句，倒装，独立主格，虚拟语气，强调句，感叹句 ★修辞丰富:比喻，夸张，拟人 一、第一段： 1.环境描写 突然!一种绝对的..控制了(ruled) .... 并且一波+情绪+席卷了sb. 万能句式: Immediately/Suddenly/, an absolute/a complete + n. + ruled the +地点n. + and a wave of +情绪n. + washed /swept over sb. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest and a wave of terror swept over her. 一阵绝对的黑暗控制了森林，并且一波恐惧(terror) 席卷了Jane。 2、动作+心理描写 万能