2024届高三英语二轮复习写作专项读后续写人物情绪描写方法课件

读后续写人物情绪、心理描写 在续写中，常用的人物情绪、心理有：开心、激动、兴奋、惊喜、震惊、悲伤、紧张、害怕、焦虑、内疚、羞愧、生气、自信、坚定...... 对这些情绪、心理的描写一般会用到三种词汇： 1. 情绪、心理类形容词、名词（这些名词会搭配介词或动词短语来使用），例如： I felt excited. A wave of excitement welled up inside me. 2. 描写面部表情的词，例如： His eyes rounded. 3. 描写身体部位、动作的词，例如： His heart was pounding wildly. 通过人物表情和动作来描写情绪、心理，会让语言读起来有画面 直白 间接 通常情况下，写作时会把这三种词汇搭配起来并结合相应的句式来进行情绪描写，词汇的搭配可以是：1+2，1+3或1+2+3。可结合的句式有： ① 情绪、心理adj.（作状语），主语+谓语 (也可放在后面) 主语+谓语 + with/ in+ 情绪、心理名词 (也可放在前面) 例如： Anxious and nervous, Anna paced back and forth. Confident and determined, David kept on running, sweat streaming down his face. We jumped up and down with excitement. 哭、笑、说、看、走、跑、拿..... 描写面部表情的词 描写身体部位、动作的词 哭、笑、说、看、走、跑、拿..... 描写面部表情的词 描写身体部位、动作的词 搭配原则直白+间接 ② 主语+谓语(哭、笑、说、看、走、跑、拿.....)，非谓语 例如： He stood there, tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes. With her heart beating wildly, the girl unwrapped her gift box. Overwhelmed by a strong sense of guilt, Jim lowered his head. 动词短语+情绪、心理名词 描写面部表情的词 描写身体部位、动作的词 （也可放在前面、或主谓中间） ③ so + 情绪adj. + that从句（写人物因这种情绪所做出的面部表情或动作），例如： Mom was so move that her eyes were shinine with tears of great joy. 该句式可以升级为倒装结构： So + 情绪adj. + 谓语 + 主语+ that...... So moved was mom that her eyes were glistening with tears of great joy. 理论结合实际，我们看一看”激动、兴奋“怎样表达： 1. 表达”激动、兴奋“的形容词及名词（搭配介词或动词短语） excited，thrilled to one’s excitement/thrill with excitement/thrill sb. couldn’t contain sb’s excitement A wave/ flush of excitement/ thrill well up inside sb. sb. be overcome with excitement/thrill. Excitement/Thrill surge through sb. sb. bubble over with excitement/thrill. sb./ one’s heart brim（-mm-）with excitement/thrill 2. 描写面部表情的词 sb. flush/ blush 某人脸通红 one’s eyes twinkle/ sparkle/ glitter/ shine (sh