湖南师大附中2023-2024学年高二上学期10月月考之读后续写不喜欢犯错的唐尼讲义

2023年10月湖南师大附中高二年级月考之读后续写写作建议 第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was once a teacher in a primary school and spent my days with a variety of students. I liked them, always trying to help them solve their problems. Of them, the most impressive to me was Donnie，a 9-year-old boy. 我曾经是一所小学的老师，每天都和各种各样的学生在一起。我喜欢他们，总是努力帮助他们解决问题。其中，给我印象最深的是唐尼，一个9岁的男孩。 Unlike most naughty boys of his age, who lived a care-free life, Donnie was a shy, nervous perfectionist. His fear of failure kept him from classroom games that other children played with joyous excitement. No matter how funny the games seemed to be, he just declined to be engaged in them. He seldom answered questions since he was afraid that he might be wrong. Written assignments, especially math, reduced him to nail-biting frustration. He seldom finished his work because he repeatedly checked with me to be sure he hadn't made a mistake. 与同龄的大多数顽皮男孩不同，唐尼过着无忧无虑的生活，他是一个害羞、紧张的完美主义者。他对失败的恐惧使他无法参加其他孩子兴奋地玩的课堂游戏。不管这些游戏看起来多么有趣，他只是拒绝参与其中。他很少回答问题，因为他担心自己可能错了。书面作业，尤其是数学作业，让他感到非常沮丧。他很少完成他的工作，因为他反复和我核实，以确保他没有犯错误。 Then one morning we were working math problems at the chalkboard. The kids were really active and responded quickly to me. Pleased with their progress, I left the children with Mary Anne, my student teacher, a lovely and clever girl, and went for art materials. However, when I returned, I found Donnie was in tears. It turned out that he'd missed the sixth problem. Poor Anne just looked at me in despair, not knowing how to deal with such a boy. Suddenly her face brightened. She immediately reached the drawer we shared for some pencils. 然后有一天早上，我们在黑板上做数学题。孩子们真的很活跃，对我的反应很快。我很高兴他们的进步，把孩子们留给了我的学生老师玛丽·安妮，一个可爱而聪明的女孩，去寻找艺术素材。然而，当我回来的时候，我发现唐尼泪流满面。结果发现他错过了第六道题。可怜的安妮绝望地看着我，不知道该怎么对付这样一个男孩。突然，她的脸色一亮。她立即来到我们共用的抽屉里放铅笔。 “See these pencils, Donnie?” she said, kneeling beside him and gently lifting the tear-stained face from his arms. “They belong to Mrs. Lindstrom and me. See how the erasers are worn? That's because we, your teac