Unit4 Looking Good,Feeling Good写作学案-2023-2024学年高中英语牛津译林版（2020）必修第一册

B1U4 Writing——真正的美 学案 1.写作任务 假定你是李华,想给某英文杂志投稿,发表一篇关于什么是真正的美的文章。下面是被询问学生的一些看法,要点如下: (1)有的学生认为外在美很重要; (2)有的学生认为内在美很重要; (3)你的观点。 注意: ①可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; ②开头已写好,不计入总词数。 Dear Editor, Concerning beauty, we made a survey. Different students have different opinions._ _ _ _ _ _ _ 2.写作思路 (1)一审:确定写作体裁和主题 体裁:议论文 主题:真正的美 (2)二定:确定时态和人称 ①时态:一般现在时态为主 ②人称:第一人称和第三人称为主 (3)三明确:明确写作要点 内容要求: a.开篇点明主题(谈论的话题); b.根据提示的要点写出对待这一问题不同的人的不同观点; c.发表自己的看法,提出解决问题的办法。 (4)四分段:结合要点分为三个段落。 3.素材整理 (1)关键词语 ①外貌 physical appearance ②对……有影响 have an influence/effect on ③美的标准 standards of beauty ④符合 live up to ⑤深信…… hold the firm belief that... ⑥树立信心 build your confidence ⑦相信…… be convinced that... ⑧就我而言 as far as I am concerned (2)重要句型 有些学生相信外貌对一个人的生活有很大影响。 ①Some students hold the firm belief that _ a person's life.(同位语从句) ②外貌对每个人都有吸引力,尤其是异性。 Physical beauty is attractive to everybody, _. ③他们坚信,外貌美没有固定标准,有些标准对我们来说根本不可能达到。 They are firmly convinced that there is _ and some of the standards are simply _.(宾语从句) ④更重要的是内在美,因为它是我们的内在,对社会来说是非常有意义的。 It is _ because it is something beneath us and can be very meaningful to the society.(强调句) ⑤我认为内在美与外在美是并存的。 _, physical beauty coexists with inner beauty. 4.满分作文(连句成篇) 请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。 参考范文: Dear Editor, Concerning beauty, we made a survey. Different students have different opinions. Some students hold the firm belief that physical appearance has a big influence on a person's life. Physical beauty is attractive to everybody, particularly to the opposite sex. Besides, charming faces can help us to win more chances to realize our dreams. However, other students are firmly convinced that there is no fixed standards of physical beauty and some of the standards are simply impossible for us to live up to. It is the inner beauty that is more important because it is something beneath us and can be very meaningful to the society. As far as I am concerned, physical beauty coexists with inner beauty. Physical beauty is by birth, but inner beauty is cultivated after birth