内容正文:
范文与重点积累
【仿写演练】
假设你是李华,梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学深造,现在你已经被悉尼大学化学学院录取,请写一封信向梁教授表示感谢。内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;2. 感谢原因;3. 如何回报。
注意: 1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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参考答案1
Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,q
Li Hua
【分析】本文是应用文写作任务,要求写一封感谢信。
【详解】
1. 审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信,人称使用第一人称和第二人称,时态用一般现在时。
2. 谋篇布局
书信格式,称呼和落款文中已经给出。
首段,写信的目的,中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助;最后一段表达祝愿。
3. 关键词和句子
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有:leaving for the United States soon,express my heartfelt gratitude,unbelievable progress,cheer me up.
通过词汇铺垫,我们就很容易地行文了,文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】本文开门见山,表达了写信的目的;
之后详细介绍了Alex对自己的帮助,详略得当,内容完整,同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。
高级词汇: eagerly,heartfelt gratitude,Honestly speaking,professional guidance等;
高级句式:Whenever I encounterdifficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. (使用了让步状语从句和定语从句。这些都提升了文章的档次)
参考答案2
Dear Professor Liang,
I am writing to extend my gratitude to you because with your help I am now a student of Chemistry Department of Sydney University.
Last June, when I applied to become a graduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuable help. Not only did you write commenda