内容正文:
范文与重点积累
【仿写演练】
假设你叫李华,高考过后计划暑假期间到美国去参加中美学生交流活动。请写一封咨询信,询问相关事宜。内容包括:
1. 对申请者的相关要求;
2. 课程的相关事宜;
3. 住宿和吃饭的条件;
4. 需要做的相关准备。
注意:
1. 词数80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks again for your time, and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案1
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m planning to travel to the USA in the coming July. Therefore, I’m writing to inquire about travel routes of your agency.
I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs. So, could you please recommend some suitable travel routes? In addition, I’d like to know the prices of the routes, covering all the traveling expenses.
A reply at your earliest convenience is highly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】
第1步:
根据提示可知,本文为一封电子邮件:假定你是李华,打算今年暑假去美国旅游。请你给Travel America国际旅行社写一封电子邮件进行咨询,内容如下:
1.请其推荐合适的旅游路线;
2.请其告知相关的旅游费用。
第2步:
根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:
in the coming July(在即将到来的七月);
inquire about travel routes of your agency(询问你的旅游路线);
have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs(看看一些独特的自然风光,领略一下当地的风土人情);
recommend some suitable travel routes(推荐一些合适的旅游路线);等。
第3步:
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I intend to stay in America for about 10 days,during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs.句中使用非限制性定语从句;I’d like to know the prices of the routes, covering all the traveling expenses.现在分词做伴随状语。
参考答案2
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am very interested in the exchange program you offered. I am writing to obtain some more detailed i