(讲义)Unit 2 Out of This World 表达 作文巧升格-【提分教练】2023-2024学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第三册(译林版2020)

写一篇关于外星人的故事 本单元要求写一篇关于外星人的故事，属于故事类的写作范畴。 [基本框架] 开头(the beginning)——引出故事 主体(the body)——具体过程 结尾(the ending)——自我感受 [常用词块] 1．a series of attacks 一连串的袭击行为 2．muddy footprints on the kitchen floor 厨房地板上的泥脚印 3．a frightening experience一次可怕的经历 4．a reported sighting of the UFO据报道有人看见飞碟 5．bring sth．to light 披露某事 6．due to human error 由于人为错误 [常用语句] ★精彩开头 1．The monster of．．．is back in the news．．． ……怪物……又上新闻了。 2．It is known to all that．．． 众所周知…… 3．It lies in．．． 它在于…… 4．It looks like．．． 它看起来像…… ★丰满主体 1．Some scientists think that．．． 一些科学家认为…… 2．Some people believe in its existence，because．．． 有些人相信它的存在，因为…… 3．By recent research，we can learn that．．． 通过最近的研究，我们可以了解到…… 4．Other scientists consider．．． 其他科学家认为…… ★余味结尾 1．Personally，I(don't)believe．．． 就我个人而言，我(不)相信…… 2．As far as I am concerned，I think．．． 就我而言，我认为…… 3．In my point of view，I believe．．． 在我看来，我相信…… 假如你是李华，请根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文，介绍你遇到外星人的一次经历。 1．发现UFO，两个外星人走出来，他们有着绿色皮肤和绿色的眼睛，不到一米高。 2．他们挖土装进袋子，回到飞碟然后飞走了。 3．你的感受。 注意：1．词数80左右； 2．可以适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。 [学生习作] One day, I was walking in the field when I saw a UFO flying in the sky．It landed in the field and two aliens walked out of it, who had green skin and green eyes．They were no more than one meter tall． The two aliens began to dig some soil and put it into a bag．Then they went back to the UFO and went away． How unforgettable an experience it was． 点评： 1.该篇习作符合故事类短文的写作要求，对整个过程描述完整，而且最后给出自己的感受。 2.文章能够使用be doing...when..., 定语从句等高级句式，使得文章表达更加连贯。 3.高级词汇使用较少，可以适当增添一些高级词汇和短语，增添文章的语言色彩。 [升格作文] One day, I was walking in the field when I heard a strange noise from the sky．It was a UFO! It began to land in the field and two aliens just came out．They had green skin and green eyes．They were not more than one meter tall．I was so frightened that I could do nothing but try to hide behind a tree． The two aliens dug some soil and put it into a bag．After that they came back to the UFO and flew away． What an unforgettable experience I had! 请你根据下列提示写一篇关于遇到外星人的经历。 1．在学校后面的山上玩，发现了一个飞碟。 2．外星人非常矮，没有头发，但有两只长耳朵。 3．外星人看见