(讲义)Unit 2 Natural Disasters 表达 作文巧升格-【提分教练】2023-2024学年新教材高中英语必修第三册(译林版2020)

介绍自然灾害 [基本框架] 1．开头——说明什么地方发生了什么样的自然灾害。 2．主体——具体介绍自然灾害造成的损失。 3．结尾——表达自己的祝愿。 [常用词块] 1．a house looking as if to fall down 看上去好像要倒塌的一栋房子 2．feel a sudden urge to run away突然想赶快逃走 3．seriously injured his legs 他的双腿严重受伤 4．cause a great loss 造成巨大损失 5．take safety measures 采取安全措施 6．cause damage to property 造成财产损失 7．leave the area in ruins 使这个地区成为废墟 8．hope to find their missing son希望找到他们失踪的儿子 假如你是李华，得知你的英国网友Bill的家乡发生山火，房屋被烧毁，他现在住在临时避难所。请你写一封邮件慰问他，内容要点如下： 1．询问受灾情况，表示关心； 2．鼓励他振作起来，重建家园。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：山火 mountain fire Dear Bill， Yours， Li Hua 【学生习作】 Dear Bill， Hear you have mountain fire and I am sad. Are you OK，now? I am worried about you. Your houses were burned down and you are living outside. That's so bad. How do you live now？Do you have water and food? I can help you. The mountain fire is not easy to put out，so you should be patient and cheer up! I am sure you will be better. Come on！Be happy and confident. Yours， Li Hua 点评： 1．句式简单，不能学以致用； 2．虽表示关心，但浮于表面客套。 【升格作文】 Dear Bill， On hearing the news that the destructive mountain fire broke out in your hometown, I am extremely worried about you. Are you or your family injured? I heard that your house was burned down and you are living in the temporary shelter now. How about the conditions there? Do you have enough clothes and food? The fire has