内容正文:
建议信
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友John来信说他们学校要组织中英文化交流项目,他要负责策划学校举办的中国文化节,但不知道如何将文化节办好,请你给他回信提一些建议,内容包括:
1.文化节活动项目; 2.学校间文化交流的意义;3.你对他的鼓励。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Thinking (审题)
Step 1
主题:
中国文化
时态:
一般现在时,将来时
体裁:
建议信
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Para.1 开头
Para.2 主体
Para.3 结尾
Outlining (列出提纲)
Step 2
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友John来信说他们学校要组织中英文化交流项目,他要负责策划学校举办的中国文化节,但不知道如何将文化节办好,请你给他回信提一些建议,内容包括:
1.文化节活动项目; 2.学校间文化交流的意义;3.你对他的鼓励。
注意: 1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
写信目的
中国文化节上的活动项目&学校间文化交流的意义
对他的鼓励
开头:写信目的(建议信的开头)
Outlining (列出提纲,写出要点)
Step 2
1. Learning/ Knowing that you have trouble/difficulty doing ... , I would like to give/offer you some suggestions.
2. I have received your letter saying that .... Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
3. You have asked me for my advice on/with regard to how to ..., and I will try to make some suggestions here.
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翻译:我收到你的来信,说你正在策划中国文化节。也许下面的建议对你有帮助。
I have received your letter saying that you are palnning the Chinese Culture Festival. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
主体:中国文化节上的活动项目
Outlining (列出提纲,写出要点)
Step 2
“活动”要围绕“中国文化”这个主题来写,“中国文化”包括哪些内容呢?知道具体内容,写的活动才具体,才有内容。会开展“活动”的“中国文化”通常有以下几个:
① traditional Chinese festivals ② Chinese art ③ Chinese food ④ Chinese literature
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主体:中国文化节上的活动项目
Outlining (列出提纲,写出要点)
Step 2
活动项目(形式 ):
invite professional actors to perform lion and dragon dances
hold an exhibition to admire calligraphy works and traditional Chinese paintings
invite a calligrapher to teach students to write Chinaese characters in regular script(楷书)
give students an opportunity to dip a brush in ink/ paint to create their own works
invite a sugar painting artist to make sugar animals and figures
organize students to learn how to make dumplings/ spring rolls.
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写建议时常用的句型:
I suggest that......
My suggestion is that......
You’d better do......
It is highly recommended that......
It is advisable to do......做某事是明智/可取的
It is a good idea to do......
I think it +adj(useful/ beneficial...)+ to do...... 我认为做某事是......
用衔接语把建议串联起来,会让句子间的