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第二讲 练升级技巧,从素颜到惊艳
技巧一 运用高级词汇,摆脱陈词滥调
评分标准第五档的要求中提到,“语法结构和词汇运用正确,或有些小错误,但是由使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”。高级词汇就像一颗颗耀眼的明珠,为作文增添光彩,从而使考生稳拿高分。选词时应遵循三条原则。
1.晚词优先原则
同样意义的词语,要根据语境尽量用高年级阶段学到的表意准确、形象生动的词代替低年级阶段学到的词。如果同样的意义重复出现,要使用不同的表达方式。
(1)basic→fundamental基本的
improve→boost提高
ability→competence能力
(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)As we both know, willingness to communicate with our partners on topics is fundamental to boosting our language competence.
我们都知道,愿意与我们的同伴就一些话题进行交流是提高我们的语言能力的基础。
(2)way→approach方式;方法
(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)I believe a more scientific approach can be adopted.
我相信可以采用一种更科学的方法。
(3)many→numerous很多的
appear→emerge 出现
great→tremendous极大的
(2023·全国甲卷)Numerous influential historical figures have emerged in China's long history,each of whom made tremendous contributions to the progress of society in their own way.
在中国悠久的历史中,出现了许多有影响力的历史人物,他们都以自己的方式为社会的进步做出了巨大的贡献。
(4)enough→sufficient 足够的
keep→maintain保持;维持
(2022·全国甲卷)Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature.
海洋不仅为我们提供了足够的食物,而且还维持着自然的平衡。
(5)more and more→an increasing number of越来越多的
many→various各种各样的
(2022·全国乙卷)Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers,an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
如今,随着智能手机和电脑的日益普及,越来越多的学生选择在课堂以外以各种方式学习英语。
2.具体化单词优先原则
所谓具体化单词优先原则是指写作中要尽量避免使用意义宽泛、模糊的词,而要根据语境使用具体、生动的词。
(1)good→attractive/brilliant
So attractive and alive do they look that I think you could be interested in them.
它们看起来很有吸引力和活力,我想你可能会对它们感兴趣。
(2)like→be keen on/be crazy about
As I know you are keen on/are crazy about traditional Chinese art, I'm writing to invite you to watch it.
我知道你对中国传统艺术很着迷,我写信是为了邀请你去参观。
3.短语优先原则
短语的意思往往比单个单词的意思更为饱满,因此考生宜利用短语巧妙表达文章的意思。如:
(1)形容词变短语的方法:of+同根名词
形容词
对应短语
very important
of great importance
very useful
of great use
very valuable
of great value
very beneficial
of great benefit
very helpful
of great help
(2019·全国Ⅰ卷)Working as a volunteer will be very beneficial to my oral English.
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