24 专题五 第三讲 行文逻辑类错误（Word教参）-【优化指导】2024高考英语二轮复习高中总复习·第2轮（老教材）

第三讲　行文逻辑类错误 在高考短文改错中，有时考生会碰到词法和句法均没有错误的句子，此时就应从行文逻辑上来判断句子的合理性。行文逻辑错误常见的有并列连词使用错误和代词使用错误。这类错误考题基本上会有所涉及，却不容易被发现，所以考生必须通过阅读全文来综合考虑。 考点一 并列连词使用错误 设错方向 典题训练 解题思路 并列连词误用 1.(2023·全国甲卷)Miss Zhao told us the names of the insects or described their living habits.or→and 2．(2020·全国Ⅱ卷)Actually, I started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old，for I have long been out of practice.for→but/yet 3．(2020·全国Ⅰ卷)First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside.but→and 4．(2023·陕西宝鸡模拟)One day, it rained heavily after school，so I didn't take the umbrellA．so→but 1.常考的并列连词有： (1)and、 both ...and ...、not only ...but(also) ...、 neither ...nor ...等表示顺承或递进关系； (2)but、 yet、 while等表示对比或转折关系；or、 either ...or ...、 not ...but ...等表示选择关系； (3)for、 so等表示因果关系。 2．常考or与and的误用、 and与but的误用、 so与but 的误用等。 并列连词多余 5.(2023·河南焦作二模)By doing so, and we will make the world better.去掉and 并列连词必须连接两个并列句，否则不能用并列连词。 [即时训练] 1．(2023·全国乙卷)She put the new color on her hair or sat still for 30 minutes, just as the directions said．or→and 2．(2022·全国甲卷)One day, he talked with me or hoped to mend our relations.or→and 3．(2020·全国Ⅲ卷)In order to make sure all of us are in good health，and she makes specific plans for us.去掉and 4．(全国Ⅱ卷)When I studied chemistry at high school，I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor.or→and 5．(全国Ⅲ卷)I have grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years.and→but 6．(2023·陕西安康二模)Acupuncture has been widely accepted in non­Chinese population but is popular in California．but→and 7．(2023·河南郑州二模)The food was expensive and the service was good．and→but 考点二 代词使用错误 设错方向 典题训练 解题思路 代词误用 1.(2023·全国甲卷)In that class, Miss Zhao, our biology teacher, showed we insects on stamps.we→us 2．(2021·全国乙卷)In my opinion, students can benefit a lot from doing some housework.Firstly ...That's our view on housework.our→my 关注代词误用常考类型 (1)指代对象不一致； (2)代指单复数不一致； (3)代词的格与文章的逻辑意义不一致； (4)人称代词与反身代词混淆； (5)形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词混淆。 不定代词 误用 3.(2023·河南开封三模)She had never used a mobile phone until sh