内容正文:
Section Ⅳ Writing of the Unit
书评/故事评论
我们读完一本书或一个故事,想要就这本书或这个故事发表一些看法,并把这些看法写成文章,这就是书评或故事评论。写作时首先要简单介绍图书或故事的基本内容,然后对书的特点、风格或故事中人物的主要成就以及缺点等给予简明扼要的评论。
[基本框架]
开头:引出书目
主体:具体介绍作品内容
结尾:阐述自己的观点和看法
[常用表达]
1.This story is about a great expedition in history.
这个故事是关于历史上一次伟大的探险。
2.The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn is one of the novels I like best.
《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》是我最喜欢的小说之一。
3.The novel tells Huckleberry Finn running away from his home and wandering down the Mississippi River.
这部小说讲述了哈克贝利·费恩从家中逃走,在密西西比河流浪的故事。
4.This story tells a poor boy through his own efforts,overcame various difficulties and finally achieved success.
故事讲述了一个贫穷的男孩通过自己的努力,克服各种各样的困难并最终取得了成功。
5.Published in 1988,the book is popular among teenagers.
这本书在1988年出版,很受青少年的欢迎。
6.The novel is the work of a famous novelist,which is well worth reading.
这本小说是一位著名小说家的作品,很值得一读。
7.He thinks to read the original works is better than to see the films based on them.
他认为阅读原著比看基于原著的电影更好。
8.His story inspires us to keep on when facing difficulties and never give up.
他的故事激励我们面对困难时坚持下去,永不放弃。
读了本单元提供的两篇航海日志后,请你写一篇关于沙克尔顿团队南极探险的故事评论。
[审题构思]
1.确定体裁:评论;沙克尔顿团队南极探险;
2.确定人称:第三人称为主;
3.确定时态:一般过去时为主。
4.确定内容:①第一段:故事简介;
②第二段:引用原文,分析人物的性格特点;
③第三段:自己的印象和感受。
[遣词造句]
1.欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员们登上了名为“坚忍”号的大船。
Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship whose name was Endurance.
2.不幸的是,途中“坚忍”号被冰困住,沉入了大海中。
Unfortunately,on the way Endurance became/was stuck in the ice and sank into the ocean.
3.在放弃那艘船后,他们逃到了象岛上。
Having abandoned the ship,they escaped to Elephant Island.
4.他们之间的关心和爱深深地打动了我。
I was deeply moved by the concern and love among them.
5.他们在困难面前的忍耐力和毅力也激励了我。
I'm also inspired by their endurance and perseverance in face of difficulties.
6.无论我们遇到什么困难,永不言弃。
Whatever/No matter what difficulties we meet,never give up.
[句式升级]
1.把句1升级为过去分词作定语的句子
Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship named Endurance.
2.把句2升级为动词ing形式短语作结果状语的句子
Unfortunately,on the way Endurance became/was stuck in the ice,sinking into the ocean.
[连句成篇]