读后续写情绪描写 课件-2024届高三英语一轮复习

Show, don’t tell 读后续写之 情绪描写 读后续写作为记叙文，其核心只有一个，那就是“人”。因此一切的笔墨，都是为了塑造人物形象，使人物更加饱满。 How to make your writing vivid and attractive? 最为重要的描写有五类：环境、动作、心理、情绪、语言 人物有互动。人物A与人物B穿插着写，有来有往，故事才会生动。 情节分步骤。主线情节简明清晰，将情节细化，把情节写的充实。 情绪分层次。人物的情绪不是单一的，而应该是多变的，有层次的。 描写分类型。从“动作”、“心理”、“对话”三个角度描写人物。 前后有对比。续写出情节的发展和人物的转变。 细节有呼应。细节上的呼应能加强原文部分与续写部分的整体性。 读后续写能力 情绪分层次 情绪词汇总 情绪 名词n. 形容词adj. 副词adv. 喜悦 delight, joy, happiness, pleasure delighted, overjoyed, happy, pleased, pleasant, glad, enjoyable joyfully, happily, gladly, cheerfully, merrily 兴奋 excitement, thrill excited, thrilled excitedly 害怕 fear, scare, fright, terror fearful, scared, frightened, terrified, afraid 情绪分层次 情绪词汇总 情绪 名词n. 形容词adj. 副词adv. 焦虑，担忧 anxiety, worry, concern, anxious, worried, concerned anxiously 后悔，内疚，羞愧 regret, guilt, shame regretful, guilty, ashamed guiltily 悲伤，沮丧，孤独 sorrow, sadness, depression, despair, hopelessness, helplessness loneliness sorrowful, sad, depressed, hopeless, helpless, lonely, upset, frustrated sorrowfully, sadly 情绪分层次 情绪词汇总 情绪 名词n. 形容词adj. 副词adv. 宽慰 relief relieved 感谢 gratitude, thank, appreciation grateful, thankful gratefully, thankfully 吃惊 shock, astonishment, amazement, surprise, shocked, astonished, amazed, surprised amazingly, surprisingly 情绪分层次 情绪描写通用模板 形容词作状语 情绪adj., 主句。 Exercise: __________, Eric burst into tears. _____________, Jane was trapped in the forest, with tears rolling down her cheeks. “Sorry,” apologized Lucy, ___________. After knowing the result, I felt like sitting on pins and needles, _______________. ___________, I opened the box softly, as if it was my precious treasure. 情绪分层次 情绪描写通用模板 2. 无灵主语 Waves of A sense of A burst of A spark of A mixture of took hold of welled up in flooded over settled over swept over seized sb. 情绪n. Exercise: When the host announced that she won the prize, ___________. The moment Dad said we would go camping next week, _____. ____________, when the polar bear approached us. Their scores were significantly higher than before. _____