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第五讲 8大热考话题,助力作文升级
[对应学生用书P133]
话题一 亲情关系
亲情关系是读后续写的热考话题之一, 2021年新高考Ⅰ卷读后续写的主题为双胞胎为母亲做惊喜早餐的故事,体现了亲情关系。
一、续写步骤
第一步:冲突构造(误会、犯错等)
发生冲突时更能体会亲情的弥足珍贵。冲突原因大致有疏于陪伴、理念不合(代沟)、误会等。
第二步:冲突化解(解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等)
第三步:亲情升华(诚实、珍惜等)
二、素材积累
(一)话题词汇
1.动作类素材积累
高兴地大叫:yell with delight
被她的善良所吸引:be fascinated with her kindness
高兴地跳起来:dance/jump for joy
流下幸福的泪水:tears of happiness flowing down
几乎无法掩饰/抑制他的兴奋的心情:can hardly conceal/contain his excitement
振作精神:keep up one's spirits
使某人心情愉快:brighten sb.'s heart
2.情绪类素材积累
因成功而兴奋不已:be excited with joy at the success
快乐至极:be overwhelmed with delight
欣喜若狂:be wild with delight
心满意足:be perfectly content/satisfied
精神高涨:be in high spirits
难以形容地开心:indescribably wild joy
极为感动:be overwhelmingly moved
既兴奋又开心:a mixture of excitement and delight
满意的表情:a satisfied look
(二)话题佳句
1.动作类素材积累
①His father shrugged and grinned,which drove away all his distress and comforted him.
他的父亲耸了耸肩,咧着嘴笑了笑,这驱散了他的一切痛苦,安慰了他。
②Delighted and thrilled,I gave a jump in the air and then skipped into the supermarket along with my smiling mother.
又高兴又激动,我跳了起来,然后蹦蹦跳跳地跟着我微笑着的妈妈进了超市。
2.情绪类素材积累
①Her daughter's hands were trembling with excitement as she opened the box.
当她的女儿打开盒子时,她的手激动得发抖。
②She came up to him,with a smile shining like a diamond.In no time his eyes were filled with warm excited tears.
她带着灿烂的笑容走到他面前。他立刻激动得热泪盈眶。
③A wild joy seized/swept over her,and a wave of joy/pleasure also welled up in me.
她快乐极了,我心中也涌起一阵喜悦。
④Full of happiness,her son jumped up and ran happily around the yard.
她的儿子高兴得跳了起来,快乐地在院子里跑来跑去。
3.主旨升华类素材积累
①It was this unique experience that made them obtain the pleasure of repaying their mother's love.
正是这种独特的经历让他们收获了回报他们母亲的爱的快乐。
②It was with his fathers words that he realized family matters the most.
是他父亲的话让他意识到了家庭才是最重要的。
③The warm golden sunlight,flooding in through the window,together with love between my family,warmed us up.
温暖的金色阳光从窗户照进来,和家人之间的爱一起,温暖了我们。
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
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