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第四讲 8个满分句式,续写高人一等
[对应学生用书P130]
满分句式1:独立主格,表达更简洁
非谓语动词作状语,其逻辑主语须与主句主语保持一致。若不一致,非谓语动词形式须另带主语,从而构成复合结构的形式作状语,这种结构称为“独立主格结构(absolute construction)”。独立主格结构由两部分组成,前一部分是名词或者代词,后一部分是非谓语动词(ing形式、ed形式或不定式)、形容词、副词或介词短语。前后两部分具有逻辑上的主谓关系。独立主格结构主要用于描绘性文字中,一般有逗号与主句分开,其作用相当于一个状语从句或并列句,常用来表示时间、原因、条件或伴随情况等。独立主格结构多数情况下可以与with复合结构互换。
佳句:Spring coming(=When spring comes), the fields are full of life.
春天来了,田野里充满了生机。
Excitement spreading over his whole face, he held my hands firmly, saying, “Great, you made it.”
=With excitement spreading over his whole face, he held my hands firmly, saying, “Great, you made it.”
他满脸兴奋,紧紧地握着我的手说,“太好了,你成功了。”
仿写:他躺在草地上,双手交叉放在头下面。
He was lying on the grass,(with) his hands crossed under his head.
满分句式2:特殊句式,表达更有力
1.强调句型
强调句型的使用是为了突出强调句子的某一部分,它是一种比较容易掌握的高级表达方式。其构成为“It is/was+被强调部分+that/who+其他”。
佳句:My teacher offered me the opportunity to showcase my talent and gave me the confidence to continue pursuing my passion for writing.
→It was my teacher who offered me the opportunity to showcase my talent and gave me the confidence to continue pursuing my passion for writing.
是我的老师给了我展示我的才华的机会,也给了我继续追求我的写作热情的信心。
2.倒装句
在写作中倒装句应用比较广泛,涉及的句型也比较多,包括部分倒装和完全倒装。常见的有:
佳句:(1)否定词置于句首时,句子用部分倒装。
(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)Never had I won such an honour in writing,but my hard work paid off.Later I was informed that there would be an award presentation.
我从来没有在写作上获得过这样的荣誉,但我的努力得到了回报。后来,我被告知将会有一个颁奖典礼。
(2)“only+状语”置于句首时,句子用部分倒装。
佳句:Only when we open up the door of our heart can we be bathed in the brilliant sunshine and enjoy the warmth of love.
只有当我们打开心门,我们才能沐浴在灿烂的阳光下享受爱的温暖。
仿写:直到那时,我才意识到,只有勇敢才能克服前进道路上的一切困难。
Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.
(3)在“so/such ...that ...”结构中,当“so/such ...”位于句首时,其后的句子用部分倒装。
佳句:I was so excited that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it.However, it was harder than expected.
→So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it.However, it was harder than expected.
我太兴奋了,迫不及待地试着骑它。然而,这比想象