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杭州一模应用文分析
46. 假定你是李华。为迎接爱尔兰姐妹学校来访,你校英语俱乐部将举行学生活动图片展,现正向全校学生征集照片。你打算参与,请你写一封邮件,说明相关信息,内容包括:
1. 描述照片内容; 2. 选择该照片的理由; 3. 表达入选期望。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear English Club,
I’m Li Hua from Class I, Senior 3.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________
Attached is the photo. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
审题:
1. 体裁:推荐信---推荐活动照片
2. 时态:一般现在时为主
3. 段落分布:
第一段:背景+目的
第二段:描述照片内容+选择该照片的理由(就是推荐该照片的理由)
第三段:表达入选期望
具体内容:
第一段:背景+目的
为迎接爱尔兰姐妹学校来访,你校英语俱乐部将举行学生活动图片展,现正向全校学生征集照片
本段落所需短语及词汇:
1. 为了:in order to do; indented to do; aiming to do ...
2. 来访:visit/ pay a visit to the school 访问学校 conduct a school visit 进行学校访问
make a school tour 进行学校参观
3. 举行图片展:hold a photo exhibition; organize a photography show
4. 征集照片:collect photos;gather pictures
5. 姐妹学校:sister school
6. 提交照片 submit a photo (for the exihibiton)
本段落所需句型:
得知.....我写信推荐
Learning/ Knowing that..., I am writing to recommend...
As a photography lover, I'm excited to participate in...
第二段:描述照片内容+选择该照片的理由(就是推荐该照片的理由)
照片内容既可以是展现学校风貌的、也可以是展现中爱文化交流的
展现学校风貌: 展现中爱文化交流
中国-爱尔兰文化节
(China-Ireland Cultural Festival)
savor(尽情享受)/enjoy Irish food
attend a lectures themed on Irish custom
a lively Irish dance performance
get dressed in traditional costume
cheer for winning the championship
学校年度运动会(school’s annual sports meeting)
a group of athletes compete in the race
a relay race接力赛
athletes in the track-and-field ground
cheer for winning the championship
描述时可用到的相关表达:
词汇:
展现(v.):show, present, showcase, display, demonstrate, exhibit
捕捉(v.):capture, seize, shoot
描绘(v.):describe, illustrate, depict, portray
象征(v.):represent, symbolize
以...为主题: is themed on / is centred on
以...为主要内容/特色: A features B= A is characterized by B
高级句式:
The photo (I selected) was photographed by ... which captures ________.
Featuring ________ , the photo I selected presents _______________.
Themed on _______, the photo was photographed