2024届高考英语应用文专题之感谢信讲义

一、原题再现假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter在某电视台举办的汉语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。现在请你给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括： 1. 表示祝贺；      2. 分析其获奖原因； 3. 请教参赛经验 二、分析和成句 1. 三段式： para.1 写作目的：写邮件来祝贺朋友获得演讲比赛一等奖 Para.2 分析获奖原因并请教参赛经验 Para.3 再次表示祝贺 2. 分解任务para.1 （1）祝贺的表达： congratulate you on your winning... express/convey/offer my heartfelt/genuine congratulations to you on your winning...(注意：名词短语要用复数） （2） 赢得汉语演讲比赛一等奖Win the first prize in the Chinese Speech Contest/Competition（3）成句：普通版：Knowing/Hearing that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Speech Contest, I’m writing to congratulate you on your success.  升级版： (Overwhelmingly/Exceedingly) Delighted to hear that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Speech Contest, I’m writing to offer my hearfelt congratulations to you. Word came that you have won... So I can’t wait to...  Nothing is more exciting than hearing that... para.2  (1)分析获奖原因： 台上：语音语调、演讲技巧等等 beuatiful pronunciation graceful/appropriate body language,  impressive speaking skills and confidence leave a deep impression on the judges (技巧：适当添加一些形容词） 台下：勤奋、努力、坚持不懈、不耻下问等等 (tireless/consistent)efforts/endeavors diligence,  persistence and perseverance... insist on practicing;  sacrifice your spare time to... turn to teachers/specialists/professionals for assistance pave the way for... 稍作总结：对于获奖我一点儿都不意外/意料之中/你值得…… It came as no surprise to me that you...+成就 From my perspective, you really deserve the prize 阐述获奖原因可用句型： 强调句： It was ... that set you apart from other candidates... What引导的主语从句 What contributed to your success was... 定语从句： You..., which is the main reason why you.../, which contributed to your... 倒装句： Not only did you... but also you..., which are the factors contributing to/resulting in... 虚拟语气： Had it not been for your sufficient/adequate preparations, you couldn’t have mastered... 无灵主语： Undoutedly, you deserve the honor since the past years have witnessed your devotion, persistence and passion in learning Chinese.  The school library witnessed your practicing Chinese day and night.  其他可用句子： 1. Undo