内容正文:
假如你是学生会主席李华,请你围绕“保护环境,低碳生活”为主题,写-封英语倡议书,旨在号召大家积极采取行动, 践行低碳生活。
内容包括:1.保护环境的重要性; 2.如何低碳生活; 3.发出倡议。
注意:1.词数80左右。2.可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Para 1.
一长句=背景/目的+呼吁
一短句=承接句
Given +n./that ...,I call on sb to do
Considering +n./that..., I appeal to sb to do
With the aim/purpose/intention of doing..., I advocate that sb(should) do
Aiming to do..., I deem it our obligation/duty/responsibility to do...
With the environment becoming increasingly severe, it's high time that sb should do..
My constructive suggestions are as follows.
Here come the details.
Para 2.
表达建议
= 句式搭建+具体建议
逻辑连接+准确简洁
You are supposed to do...;
You ought to do...;
You are required/ expected/ encouraged to do;
It is high time that you should do...;
There is no doubt/denying that you should do..
It is strongly recommended that you (should) do..
It is strongly recommended to do...;强调句:
It is + doing sth + that + is also an effective measure/ a smart alternative
So...that..倒装句 (如此...以至于) : So essential is +主语+that +句子
评价要点:非谓语doing;定语从句;
1. You are supposed to do..., which not only...but also...
2. It is + doing sth + that + is also a smart alternative.contributing to...
Para 3.
点明主题 + 再次呼吁
Only+介词短语/状语从句,+主句 (半倒装)
1.Only through combined efforts, can we..
2.Only when we make joint efforts, will the world...
I hold a firm belief that...
I am fully convinced that...
官方范文,
Dear fellow students,
With the development of modern industry, the environment is becoming increasingly worse. It's high time that we should take measures, or we would have nowhere to live.
We students can protect our environment by living a low-carbon life.Firstly, do turn off lights and other switches when not using them to save electricity. What's more, if we go out, we should walk, ride or take public transport instead of driving. Finally, reusing paper and bottles in our daily life is also highly recommended.Let's make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment.
I strongly believe that a better world owes to the commitment a