内容正文:
B1U2 Writing——青少年问题 学案
1.写作任务
假定你是光华学校学生会主席李华,负责接洽本校国外交换生。最近你收到来自英国的高一新生Lucy的邮件,诉说自己和父母远程交流时,在学习问题上经常容易发生争吵。请给她回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示理解;
2.给出建议;
3.安慰对方。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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2.写作思路
(1)一审:确定写作体裁和主题
体裁:应用文——建议信(邮件)
主题:亲子关系
(2)二定:确定时态和人称
时态:一般现在时为主
人称:第一人称(I)和第二人称(you)
(3)三明确:明确写作要点:表示理解——给出建议——安慰对方
(4)四分段:结合写作要点分三个段落
3.素材整理
(1)关键词语
①受……困扰be troubled by/be upset by
②因为某事和某人争吵argue with sb. over sth.
③发脾气lose temper
④经历go through
⑤身心变化physical and mental changes
⑥和某人交流have communication with sb.
⑦解决某人的担忧address one's concerns
⑧让某人冷静下来calm sb. down
⑨结果变好turn out better
(2)完成句子
①我很理解你因为学习问题和父母争吵而感到烦恼。
I quite understand that you ________________________.
②你可能会经历一些生理和心理上的变化。
You may________________________.
③为什么不试试这些建议,看看它们是否有用呢?
__________________________ these pieces of advice and see if they help?
④你可以与父母坦诚沟通,了解他们的担忧,分享你的想法以便解决他们的担忧。
You can ________________________, figure out their worries and share your thoughts in order to ____________________.
⑤尽量让自己冷静下来,从他们的角度去理解情况。
Try to ________________________ and understand the situation from their point of view.
⑥最终一切都会好起来的。
Everything will ________________________ in the end.
4.满分作文(连句成篇)
请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。
参考范文:
Dear Lucy,
I quite understand that you are troubled by arguing with your parents over your studies. Actually, it is quite normal for you to lose temper since you may go through some physical and mental changes.
Why not try these pieces of advice and see if they help? First, have an honest communication with your parents, figure out their worries and share your thoughts in order to address their concerns. Second, try to calm yourself down an