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Practical Writing
(How to write a letter of suggestion?)
Growing Energy
(Problems and advice)
I’m worried about being fat.
/I have problems getting along with my friends.
Brainstorming
What problems/worries do you have?
be short of energy
Good morning, class. Since we got into Grade Nine. I know you have faced lots of challenges. I see, some of you look short of energy. So before the class, In fact, everyone has worries. so I wanna fist share with you about my worries with you. I .....(bb) Then what are your worries?(直接问,不停顿)
Listen carefully.
Listen carefully.
Find out what Mary’s problems are?
too much homework
argue with parents
Infact, yesterday one of my students mary also sent me a message. She had some problems too. Now, let’s listen to her worries and try to get .../
Can you give Mary some advice?
Maybe she should/shouldn’t ...
too much homework
argue with parents
提前布置 too much homework _什么建议 argue with parents--什么建议 你们的worries是什么
Write a letter to Mary
since Mary has so many problems. I think it’s hard to express my ideas clearly on the wechat. So I decide to write a letter to her.Then class,
Outline
Para I
Para 2
Para 3
?
Let’s find out what should be written in each part.
1. Show my understanding
☼ I'm sorry to hear/know that ...
☼I know how it feels to (be/do ... ). It happens to everyone
2. Show that I will give her some advice
☼Here, I'd like to share with you some advice that may help you out.
Para 1: What is my writing purpose?
Tip 1: Be sure about your writing purpose.
Outline
Para I
Para 2
Para 3
?
Let’s find out what should be written in each part.
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble dealing with your homework and getting along with your family. Actually, it happens to everyone. So don't be nervous. I 'd like to share with you some advice that may help you out.
Para 3: Which one is better?
Tip 2: Be polite.
☼ Life in Junior Three is not easy. You should follow my advice and you can s