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,。经典案例·细审题
动物是人类的朋友,请你以“My favourite animal”为题写一篇短文,介绍你最喜爱的动物。
要求:1.词数60左右,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯:
2.文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
【审题指导】
【词汇储备】
审主题:介绍最喜爱的动物
1.be/come from来自
审体裁:说明文
2.live on.以…为食
审人称:第三人称
3.all over the world全世界
审时态:一般现在时
4.be good at..擅长
审要点:介绍最喜欢的动物及原因,介绍动物的特征
5.many kinds of许多种
,。谋篇布局·搭框架。。
开篇点题
1.Elephants are my favourite animals
2.They have strong bodies and long noses
变式:They have strong bodies
3.They come from many different countries.
变式:
4.They live in Africa or Asia.
详
最喜爱的动物
句子升级:
(与3合并为一句)
鑫
5.They are good at many things.
句子升级:They are good at many things,
(carrying heavy things.carrying people)
6.I like them.
句子升级:I like them
(because...)
7.They eat leaves as well as grass.
变式:
(live on)
表达感受
8.Elephants are our friends.We should try our best to live in peace with them.
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。。落笔成文·赏佳作。。
1.0基础版
2.0提升版
My favourite animal
My favourite animal
There are many kinds of animals in
There are many kinds of animals in the
the world.Among them,elephants are
world.Among them,elephants are my favourite
my favourite animals.
animals.
They have strong bodies and long
They have strong bodies with long noses.
noses.
Elephants come from
many
Elephants come from different countries and
different countries.I like them because
most of them live in Africa or Asia.I like them
they are cute.And they are good at
because they can help us do many things.They
many things.They eat leaves as well as
are good at many things,such as carrying heavy
grass.
things or people.They live on leaves as well as
Elephants are our friends.We
grass.
should try our best to live in peace with
Elephants are our friends.We should try our
them.
best to live in peace with them
,写作练笔·显身手
动物园里新来了一只大熊猫,假如你是动物园的一名工作人员,请根据下面表格信息向游客们
介绍一下。
名字
年龄
喜爱的食物
每天的食量
喜欢的活动
美美
五岁
树叶,植物、竹子(最爱)
大约15千克竹子
爬树
要求:1.条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确:2.60词左右。3.I have some eggs and milk for beeakfast at 7:00 am.
Ⅲ,15 CBBDA
is very cule.Do you like her?I hope you can have a good time
4.I go to school from Monday to Friday.
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