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。经典案例·细审题。
假如你是王凯,下表内容是你的日常活动及时间安排。请你写一篇短文,描述自己一天的学校生活。
要求:1.词数70左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
日常活动
时间
日常活动
时间
起床
6:30am
开始上课
1:30pm
吃早餐
7:00am
回家
4:30pm
开始上课
7:50am
做作业
8:00pm
吃午餐
11:30am
上床睡觉
9:30pm
【审题指导】
【词汇储备】
审主题:介绍学校生活
I,favourite subject最喜欢的科目
审体裁:记叙文
2.have breakfast吃早餐
审人称:第一人称
3.start lessons开始上课
审时态:一般现在时
4.do homework做作业
审要点:介绍一天的具体活动及时间安排
5.go to bed上床睡觉
谋篇布局·搭框架。。·
开篇点题
1.I have a busy school day
句子升级:
(改为感叹句)
2.I get up at half past six in the morning.
仿写a.
(用have breakfast、go home等动词短语替换get up)
仿写b.
(用表示时间的短语替换half past six)
仿写c.
(用on weekdays、at weekends等替换in the morning)
我的学校生活
详细描述
3.I have breakfast at 7:00 am.
句子升级:
(some eggs and milk)
4.I go to school on weekdays.
句子升级:
(from...to)
5.My favourite subject is History.
变式:
句子升级:
(because】
表达感受
6.My school day is busy
句子升级:
(but)
501
·。落笔成文·赏佳作。
1.0基础版
2.0提升版
Hello,I am Wang Kai.I have a
Hello,I am Wang Kai.What a busy school
busy school day.
day I have!
In the morning,I usually get up at
In the morning,I usually get up at half past
half past six.Then I have breakfast at
six.Then I have eggs and milk for breakfast at
7:00am.
7:00 because they are good for my health.
Lessons start at 7:50 am.History is
Lessons start at 7:50 am.History is my favourite
my favourite subject.I have lunch at
subject because it is interesting.At 11:30 am,I
11:30 am.In the afternoon,lessons
have lunch with my classmates.And lessons
begin at 1:30 pm.I usually go home at
start at 1:30 in the afternoon.I go home at half
4:30 pm.Then I do my homework at
past four.Then I do my homework at 8:00 pm.I
8:00 pm.I go to bed at 9:30 pm
go to sleep at 9:30 pm.
My school day is busy.But I really
My school day is busy but interesting.
love it.
really love it.
,,写作练笔·显身手。“
假如你是李华,你的朋友Ls是一名英国学生,她对中国学生的学校生活很感兴趣。请你给她
写一封电子邮件,向她介绍一下你的学校生活。
提示:1.你一天的活动安排:2.你喜欢的课程等。
要求:1.语句通顺,条理清晰;2.60词左右(电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Lisa,
I am very glad to write to tell you something about my school life.
Yours,
Li HuaModule 4 Healthy food
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