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。●经典案例·细审题
假如你是李华,请根据右边这张全家福向大家介绍一下你的家庭。
要点:1.家庭成员及身份:2.你的感受。
要求:1.词数60左右:
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【审题指导】
【词汇储备】
审主题:根据照片介绍家庭成员
I.a photo of my family一张我的家人的
审体裁:说明文
照片
审人称:第一人称或第三人称
2.on the left of..在…的左边
审时态:一般现在时
3.next to在…旁边
审要点:介绍家庭成员及身份,表达感受
4.in front of..,在…的前面
谋篇布局·搭框架。“
引出话题
1.There are four people in my family
句子升级:There are four people in my family.
(引出家庭成员)
2.My father's job is at a police station.
变式:
介绍家庭成员
详细介绍
3.My mother is a doctor
句子升级:The woman
(next to:and
4.This is my brother.He is a small baby.
句子升级:
表达感受
5.This is my family.I love my family very much.
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·。落笔成文·赏佳作。
1.0基础版
2.0提升版
This is a photo of my family.
This is a photo of my family.There are four
There are four people in my family.
people in my family.They are my parents,my
My father's job is at a police
brother and I.
station.He likes reading novels.My
My father is a policeman.He likes reading
mother is a doctor.She works very
novels.The woman next to my father is my mother
hard.This is my brother.He is a
and she is a doctor.She works very hard.My
small baby.This is me.I am a
brother is a small baby.This is me.I am a student.
student.I like watching TV.What
I like watching TV.What about you?
about you?
This is my family.I love my
This is my family.I love my family very
family very much.
much.
·,,写作练笔·显身手“。·
每一张全家福的背后,都有一个温暖的故事。请你就一张你的全家福以“My family”为题写一
篇英语小短文,介绍一下你的家庭。
提示:1.家庭成员的简要信息;
2.表达对家人的爱。
要求:1.要点齐全,句子通顺:
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名;
3.词数60左右。
My familyUnit 2 These are my parents.
4.My bruther is a small baby.
Unit 3 Language in use
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【写作练笔·显身平】
【语法辅炼1
My family
I.1.driver 2:bus 3.policeman 4.bospital 5.nurse
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There are five poople in my family.They are my grandparents.
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my parents and 1.My grandprests are teachers.They like reading
III.1.manager of a hotel 2.your uncle's job:an actor
m.1.isn't any 2.There is 3.Are there any:Yes:there are
books very much.My father is a doctor,and my mother is a nurse.
3.at the same school