读后续写遇险类--电梯惊魂讲义-2024届高三英语复习写作专项

阅读下面材料，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一篇完整的故事。 I felt so nervous. It was the day of my interview. I woke up early just to make sure I would have time to get prepared. It felt like a normal Monday, but for me, this day was very important. There was a lot of pressure. After showering, I put on the outfit I had carefully chosen and laid out the night before. I looked at my reflection in the mirror. “You can do this,” I encouraged myself. I ate breakfast and fed my cat. I made my way to the bus stop and waited patiently. Aside from the rapid tapping of my right foot, no one could tell that I was so nervous. When I arrived at my stop, I walked to the office. The building was so tall and I felt small in its shadow. But I also felt hopeful. This will be a great opportunity, I thought. And what is there to lose? Looking down at my watch, I noticed that I was early. This allowed plenty of time to review my resume (简历) and further prepare myself for the interview. The doors of the building were impressive, all steel and glass and very modern. When I walked in, someone showed me the waiting area and offered me a cup of coffee. After a few moments, a man in a nice suit told me to join him. As we walked toward the elevators, I began to feel anxious. The palms of my hands began to sweat. It seemed like an hour had passed before I heard the “ding” of the elevators opening. We got into the elevator, full of men and women dressed to the nines（完美地）. “It’s quite a large office,” the man said to me. I chuckled nervously. I could feel myself getting warmer. I couldn’t wait to hear that comforting “ding” that signaled an escape. As the elevator climbed, I again nervously checked my watch. Just as I looked down, it happened.            这篇文章有很多情节构思，而主题如何在结尾呈现需要下点功夫。 本文需要围绕两个问题：1.我紧张地去面试，结果如何？2.我被困在电梯里，如何脱困？ 主题：既要体现我如何脱困（体现某种品质），又要说明面试结果（让我开心的结果）。 这种结尾以突出开心的结果为主，即：事情办成了。我们可以说是自然结尾。因此有两种方法： 方法一：某人的对话（说明主旨），事情成功了。(例如version1, 2)     方法二：个人感悟，事情办成了。（例如version 1, 3) 写作中突出的问题是：脱离文章中的问题设计谈主题（譬如有写对待职业的态度，生活中充满信