读后续写2021年6月浙江省高考真题讲解课件-2024届高考英语作文复习专项

English Continuation Writing 读后续写 2021年浙江省高考真题 主讲人：Cathy 1 考情分析 能基本读懂故事，对原文本分析不够具体到位。 写作情节偏离，逻辑混乱，衔接不当。 句式简单，描写生硬。 教学目标 通过阅读圈，引导学生从主题语境，篇章结构，故事情节词汇处理等多角度去深度解析文本，帮助学生理顺情节发展。 通过主述位推进帮助学生搭建文章逻辑结构。 通过提供语料，作文互批表，明确批改润色要求，反复练习，指导学生写出更自然合理、衔接得当的作文。 文本分析 part1 Let’s watch. What’s your daddy like? Please use three words to describe your beloved father. My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses. 01 I didn't really understand his world either：He was a livestock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass（超过）anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation. 02 Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone（长号）. 03 The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. 04 After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to. 04 At home, my dad said, "A job's a big step to growing up. I'm glad you will be contributing to the household." My dad's words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished. 05 My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was not fair that