2024年英语中考二轮复习之书面表达 课件

书面表达 什么是好作文？ 要求 此题主要考查学生直接用英语进行比较简单的书面表达的能力。 具体要求为： 1. 切中题意，文理通顺 2. 上下文连贯，逻辑正确 3. 要素完整，语言准确，得当 4. 无大小写和拼写错误，书写规范、整洁，标点符号使用正确 5. 达到一定的词数要求（不少于70词） 连贯 切题 规范 完整 正确 第一档(13～15分)：符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清楚，语句通顺，语言正确无误。词汇运用准确，句型运用恰当。全文结构严密，完整，语言流畅。无任何标点或语法错误。 第二档(10～12分)：符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清楚，语句较通顺，语言基本无误。有语法或标点错误，但句子较为顺畅，文章思路清晰，逻辑推理正确，结构完整。 第三档 (7～ 9分)：基本符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清楚，语句较通顺，语言有部分错误。语法或标点错误较多。句子不够顺畅，文章结构不严密，但表达意义清晰。 第四档( 4～ 6分)：不符合题意要求，表达不清楚，逻辑关系混乱，语法或标点错误过多。字数不够，语意表达不清晰，文章逻辑关系混乱。 第五档( 0～ 3分)：未能传达给读者任何信息；内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。 中考英语书面表达评分规则 如何写好作文？ 要求 1. 切题 2.完整 3. 连贯 4. 正确 5. 规范 审题 切题 完整 正确 连贯 规范 人称 字数 时态 ：第三人称 ：多为一般现在时 每个人都有自己喜欢的衣服，请根据提示语，以“My favorite XXX”为题，写一篇短文，介绍一件你最喜爱的衣服。 人称： 第一、三人称 时态：描述部分用现在时；记叙部分用过去时 是否需要补充内容 审题要点 正确看待作文要求的 “正确” 切题 完整 正确 连贯 规范 I have a good friend. She is Mary. She is good for me. She like study English, her English is very good. And she is good at math. She very like math. She like play basketball very much. She also like go to the park in weekend. The park have many good things. This is my friend. I have a good friend. She is Mary. She is very good to me. She likes studying English and her English is very good. And she is good at math. She likes math very much. She also likes going to the park on weekends. The park has many good things. This is my friend. 正确 简单内容准确无误 高级词汇刻意使用 1. 简单内容准确无误 学生范文： My Watch Sister I have a watch sister. She is cute. His name is Li Jingyi. Her English name is Star. She likes draw, sing and play games…She have a round face, a small mouth and two big eye. She studies at No. 5 Changing Road Primary School. She looks like me, and we are different. We often play together and have fun. 简单内容准确无误 1. 避免中式英语 2. 人称代词的一致性 3. 动词的形式变化 5 连词的正确使用 4. 名词的单复数变化 简单内容准确无误 1. 避免中式英语 2. 人称代词保持一致 3. 动词的形式变化 5. 连词的正确使用 4. 名词的单复数变化 …… 练习 He has two watery eye. Tom’s father is interested to swimming. Dean always win the second place in the match. They very like eating junk food. He