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Reading for Writing
Unit 2 Travelling Around
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PART ONE
Vocabulary
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1. sight
catch sight of ... 看见... ...
练习:How do you plan to see all of these_______?
sight
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2. comment
make a comment on... 对... ...发表评论
comment on/upon 对... ...发表评论
练习:My 10-year-old noticed him and made a _________on how bad it must be to have to stand outside in the cold wind.
comment
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3. view
come into view 进入视野
in one's view 在某人看来
have a good view of 清楚地看到
练习:This __________ is common across all sections of the community.
view
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PART TWO
Lead-in
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Please read the page about the Terracotta Army from a travel brochure and tell us what amazes you most.
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PART THREE
While-Class
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Read the brochure first, and then answer the following questions:
1.What is the purpose of writing the passage?
2.Try your best to shorten the passage into two sentences.
To introduce some information about the Terracotta Army.
The statues are a part of the huge tomb of the emperor which was discovered in 1974 and has not been completely unearthed. Each one is a copy of a real soldier.
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What aspects of the travel plan does the email address?
where to go
when to go
why
how
with whom
what to do
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Paragraph Main idea Detail
1 main purpose for the trip go to Xi'an to see the Terracotta Army
2 other plans for the trip go to the Shaanxi History Museum, visit the Xi'an City Wall and a few other famous sights
3 transport the train
4 final thoughts write again, send photos, hear from Xiao Li
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Emotion Detail
It is an amazing sight. It is amazing.
I'm amazed.
...is almost unbelievable. I can't believe it.
It's hard to believe.
It's an unbelievable story.
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Read the email again and find out what factors should be included when writing a travel plan in an email.
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【写作思路】(一审、二定、三明确、四分段)
(1)一审:确定写作体裁和主题体裁:应用文—告知信
主题:给Richard回信,告诉他自己的假期旅行计划及安排。
(2)二定:确定时态和人称(与体裁和主题息息相关)
时态:一般将来时(对于即将到来的旅行的计划)
一般现在时(一般描述)
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(3)三明确:明确写作要点
要点:①对Richard的来信做出评价和反馈
②具体的旅游计划(交通方式、旅游景点、旅行的目的和意义)
③旅游的心得体会
(4)四分段(与写作要