内容正文:
读后续写讲解
写作步骤:
“四步答题法”。
阅读—拟稿—润色—成稿。
Step1 Reading阅读,理清故事情节,找出5W+1How。画出关键词,根据所给的段落首句预测后续故事
1. Make sense of the main plots of the passage.
2. Analyze the two given sentences&under
ine key words to predict what is to follow.
Step2 Draft拟稿
work out an outline
Step 3 Polish 润色
1.Use the key words and phrases in the passage.
2.use different sentense structures.
check whether the verb forms and words spelling is correct.
step4 Present (成稿)
Produce the final work.
Write correctly,neatly and pretty!
Jenny was a pretty eight-year-old girl. One day when she and her mother were checking out at the grocery store, Jenny saw a plastic pearl necklace, by which she was totally defeated. How eagerly she wanted it! But when she saw the price, her heart sank a little. She gathered up her courage and asked her mother if she would buy it for her. Her mother said, “Well, it is a pretty necklace, but it costs an awful lot of money. I can buy you the necklace, but when we get home, we should make up a list of housework that you can do to pay for the necklace.” Jenny agreed immediately, feeling a burst of joy. So her mother bought the pearl necklace for her. Jenny worked on her housework determinedly and earnestly every day. Soon Jenny paid off the pearls.
Jenny had a very loving daddy. When Jenny went to bed, he would read Jenny her favorite story. One night when he finished the story, he said, “Jenny, do you love me?” “Oh, yes, Daddy, you know I love you.” the little girl said delightedly, with a broad smile on her face. “Well, then, give me your pearls.” Hearing that, Jenny froze there, an anxious expression twisting her face. “Oh! Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Rosy, my favorite doll. Remember her? You gave her to me last year for my birthday. Okay?” “Oh no, darling, that’s okay.” Her father brushed her cheek with a kiss, gently and calmly. “Good night, little one.”
A week later, her father once again asked Jenny after her story, “Do you love me?” “Oh yes, Dad