读后续写之家庭宠物情缘 课件-2024届高考英语复习作文专项

读后续写故事模型七 家庭--宠物情缘 1 (山东东营。高一统考期末) She came into my life when I was seven years old. My dad found her at work. She was wandering and starving. He took one look at her, and said, “Seems like you could have a good home." He opened up the door to his truck and she jumped in. Her tail wagged(摇动)all the way. I was still at school when Dad arrived home with the puppy. Mom and Dad fed her and gave hera bath. This would be my first pet. I had always wanted a dog. My parents told me when I was old enough and responsible, I could have one. Well, I guessed they figured the time was right. When I walked back home, a white and black puppy with a red bow stuck to her head greeted me with many puppy kisses. A wild joy took hold of me and a very special friendship was born that day. Now she needed a name. My older brother laughed at her and said her tail didn’t wag back and forth like others, but went in a circle. He moved his finger around his ear, and said,“She's squirrelly (古怪的).”Thus my puppy got her name, Squirrelly. Squirrelly was a smart dog and brought me much joy._________________________________________________________________________________ However, arthritis(关节炎)hit my best friend when she was 12.________________________________________________________________________________ 一、情节梳理 1. 预设情节填空 本文以时间顺序展开，讲述了作者从小就渴望拥有一只小狗，在作者7岁的时候，爸爸从外面捡了一只小狗回来，作者和小狗一见如故，一份特殊的友谊就此开始。预设情节中对小狗与“我”亲昵的描写可作为续写的参照。 When I was seven years old, my dad (1)_____________a dog and took it home The first time we met, the puppy welcomed me with (2)_________,which made me (3)__________ As her tail didn’t wag like others, I (4)___________her “Squirrelly" joyful picked up kisses named 一、情节梳理 2. 续写情节指引 1)由第一段首句内容“Squirrelly是一只聪明的狗狗，带给我很多欢乐。”可知，第一段主要描写Squirrelly 具休带给“我”哪些欢乐。 QI: How did we get along with each other every day?(开放式情节，需符合生活常识，预设情节中小狗的行为可以适当复现) Q2: To what extent did our friendship develop? 一、情节梳理 2. 续写情节指引 2)由第二段首句内容“然而，我最好的朋友在它12岁那年得了