内容正文:
读后续写故事模型七
家庭--节日插曲
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(湖北,高一校联考阶投练习)
Grandma got Grandpa out of bed and helped him to the kitchen for breakfast. After his meal,she led him to his armchair in the living room where he would rest while she cleaned the dishes. Every so often, she would check to see if he needed anything,
This was their daily routine after Grandpa's latest stroke (中风)。Although Grandpa was once very active, strong and healthy man, his badly damaged left arm, difficult walking and slurred(含混不清)speech now kept him housebound, For nearly a year he hadn't even been to church or visited family. Grandpa filled his hours with television. He watched the news and game shows while Grandma went about her day. They made an agreement---he was not to leave his chair or his bed without her assistance.
Grandma was friendly, outgoing and unselfish; Grandpa was reserved and devoted to his family. But he didn't like giving gifts. He held the belief that if you treated your wife well throughout the year, presents weren't necessary; so he rarely bought gifts for her.
It was Valentine's Day(情人节),a typical cold winter moning in New York. As always,Grandma walked Grandpa to his chair. “I'm going to take a shower now," she handed him the television remote, “If you need anything, I'll be back in a little while."
After her shower, she glanced towards the back of Grandpa's chair but noticed that his walking stickwas not in its usual place.___________________________________________________________________
As she stood alone on the street desperately, Grandpa walked around the corner.__________________________________________________________________
一、情节梳理
1. 预设情节填空
本文以人物为线索展开。爷爷中风以后左臂机能损伤、走路困难、口齿不清,奶奶每天都细心照料他,并且和他约定,他不能独自离开家。爷爷从前不喜欢给奶奶送礼物,因为他认为只要丈夫一整年都对妻子好,就不需要送礼物。这天是情人节,奶奶要去洗澡,她让爷爷自己看会儿电视。预设情节中“爷爷以前不怎么给奶奶买礼物”这一内容给续写情节设计提供了关键信息。
The latest stroke kept Grandpa housebound with:
his badly damaged left arm
(1)___________walking
slurred speech
Every day Grandma (2)_____________Grandpa carefull