高考总复习写作第一讲课件-2024届高三英语二轮复习

高考写作 Gaby 一、高考英语作文评分 第五档（21~25分） ①覆盖所有内容要点 ②应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 ③语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力 ④有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 二、满分作文的要求 1.覆盖全部要点——审题 2.结构合理，详略得当，过渡自然——行文 3.高级词汇，复杂句式，语法正确——积累 4.合理想象——加分 三、高分写作秘诀 卷面整洁 ——好印象 明确分段 ——好形式 要点全面 ——好给分 虎头凤尾 ——好内容 巧用连接 ——好逻辑 好词好句 ——好语言 明确分段——好形式 “TEEC”结构： topic sentence explanation example concluding sentence 【例1】（2012年全国卷） 假如你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡举办夏令营。欢 迎各国学生参加。请写封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括 ： 1.自我介绍（包括英语能力） 2.参加意图（介绍中国，了解其他国家） 3.希望获准 100个字左右作文题目！ Topic sentence: I am ... who is from ... . I was informed by an announcement from Internet that there will be a summer camp in Singapore this vocation. Therefore, I am very eager to write to you to apply to this camp. Explanation: As for the reasons, for one thing… For another… What’s more… Example: From my perspective, it will be a great opportunity for me to…, which will also improve.... Besides, I can also… . All of this sound so wonderful. Concluding sentence: It will be my great honor if I can …, looking forward to your good news. 虎头——好内容 1. It is universally acknowledged that… 2. As a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”. On the one hand, …; On the other hand, … 3. With the development of economy, in recent decades, individuals in increasing number are immersed in doing … 凤尾——好内容 1. It is of great value for me to be in possession of the opportunity to do sth., and my sincere expectation is that I will bear it in my mind all the time. 2. With the development of society, … So it’s urgent and necessary to… If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better. 巧用连接——好逻辑 时间顺序: at the same time, all of a sudden, afterwards 递进: besides(还有), furthermore(而且), moreover(此外) 转折: however(然而), but(但是), on the country(相反)，after all(毕竟) 总结: finally(最后), at last(最后), in brief(总之), in conclusion(最后) 强调: indeed(确实) certainly(一定) surely(确定) above all(尤其) 对比: in the same way(同样地), just as(正如), on the one hand…on the other hand 好词好句——好语言 高级词汇