读后续写之家庭长辈引导 课件-2024届高考英语复习作文专项

读后续写故事模型二 家庭--长辈引导 1 (安徽马鞍山·高一统考期末) One day, Daddy Bear suggested having a really wild camping. "What is a really wild camping? Is it an adventure?” wondered Dudu. "Yes! Everything in the city is too comfortable, We need to go to the wild to have an experience!" replied Daddy Bear. “Can I play with my toy cars there? And can I watch cartoon there?" Dudu was a little worried. There are more interesting things there! We can bathe in the clear pool, taste delicious wild fruits, fish by the clear lake and fall asleep in the quiet night." Daddy described it in excitement. “It’s wonderful!" Dudu was deeply attracted to the description. “But maybe it's dangerous!" Mama Bearworried. “Mommy always worries so much! I want to be an explorer this time!" Dudu thought Dudu and his families started off. First, they needed to cross a single-log(独术的)bridge.This single-log bridge was the only way to the forest. Seeing the rushing water under the single-logbridge, Dudu had a little regret about coming here with Daddy Bear. “Don’t be afraid!” encouraged Daddy Bear, "Just go ahead. Don't look at the river!" Dudu tried to tiptoe(踮着脚走)on the bridge, and the bridge started to shake. Dudu was so scared that he kept his body unmoved. “The bridge frightens you on purpose! Just go ahead! The bridge won't shake!” Daddy said behind Dudu. Dudu continued to go ahead. “Ha ha! It’s true! The bridge really doesn’t shake anymore!” Dudu cried happily, going faster. When Dudu went to the middle of the bridge, the roaring water really scared him.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dudu and his family climbed up to the top of the mountain._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、情节梳理 1. 预设情节填空 本文以人物线索展开。熊爸爸建议全家来一次真正意义的野营，并描述了所有令人兴奋的事项，小熊对此满怀期待。在途中，他们需要经过一座独木桥，熊爸爸和熊妈妈让小熊先行，并在小熊畏缩不前的时候鼓励他。语篇整体比较简单，为续写做的铺垫也非常明显，一是在目的